PudgeyTheBird
I dont know why people are review bombing it for no reason but i think it good readsince you aren't hearing anything from the other reviews hereMc is a jail guard of some kingdom and since he has a golden finger that allows he to basically loot the jailed.It simple and gold compared to the latest new releases
I just can't get enough of this novel, I would definitely recommend it to anyone ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️nice job author
This is actually a rather interesting story. Can’ wait to see where it goes.
This one is soo much better than the last one
Okay, I have read this for the first time and I have to say, not the best, not the worst.The english is functional, there are mistakes but not enough to kill someone. I'd say they are mostly the result of a lack or knowledge about english or it not being the authors first language.The updates seem to be reasonable from what I can see in the table of contents, no problem there.The movement of the story can be a quick at times but for the most part it's well paced. 5/5 on that, good job.Character design is interesting, and I'm sure it'll get better as we spend more time around them. Some characters though they might come off as annoying could be redeemed with enough work and development.Not much to say about world design. It's a got some good ideas behind it and has the potential to go above and beyond.All in all, good stuff, keep up the good work.Requested by Murphy.
I have read nearly 700 ch of this novel and all i can say is this novel is one of the best if not the best novel out there.
-the characters and the world background are properly fleshed out, you can tell that the author has done some really good research on locations, folklore and co.
-mc has no harem, he only has his wife and adopted children
-really refreshing and diverse abilities which follow a logical consistency for all characters
-mc is coolheaded, doesn´t save everybody, he calculates the danger his actions mean for his companions and he screens ( with his ability) the savee if they are worth it to be saved or he gets paid for it
-mc believes in equal exchange ( doesnt do shit for free)
-he strengthens his family so they can protect themselves ( massiv plus point)
-writing quality is good better than 90% of the other novels out there, there are still some grammatical and spelling errors. The author uses his and her right (balsam for my poor soul)
-and the most important of all : IT IS NOT REPETITIVE
give it a try its a really good and sometimes funny read
sry for the engrish, its not my first language ( same for author)
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This is my new Review, I am pleased to see this story developed into a wholesome, and emotional story. I just love the Novel. Your writing is on top, world background was splendid, and the Character design, sheesh I was getting emotional! Dude, thank you for making this. I'll me sharing this with a friend of mine and others aight? Good luck on the rest of your Journey!
Maybe include spoiler !!!!Not recomend for ******** action-game like readers. No OP MC. The first chatpers are storybuilding arc thats why its lack action scenes. Differrent profession between NPC and Players is quite interesting idea (will take long chapters to explain all system anyways).
I guess I'll commend the author for he only cares for his reader's opinion about the book and doesn't even care for the money. I respect you dude. And your novels grear by the way, with just the right amount of pacing and I love that its not harem, hehehe well good luck on your novel man.
This is actually pretty cool, it’s well planned out and from the time of my review (at chapter 17), im really starting to get into the flow of this book. To anyone reading my review i hooe you enjoy this as much as i have.
