I can only say that this novel has me hooked its a super good read and I love that the author is limiting the harem [img=recommend][img=update]
I Honeslty really like it but you need to fix the grammer, at some points I’m straight guessing what ur trying to write. Other than writing everything is dope hope the story continues for a while .
Good job author, you improved chap after another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good workalso guys u must read it because this author is very disciplined and always delivers
wow! I'm impressed! this book is really dark, but also quite funny. in the first 10 chaps it's already noticeable that the characteristics of the main character are by no means monotonous, which really surprised me, since it's really different from similar looking books! the sm*t is written really well and seems quite realistic and the power concept is innovative and also seems way more realistic and balanced than most common used systems. I think this novel has great potential and hope the author doesn't drop it. I'm looking forward to new chaps!!
This novel is average at best. The characters are 1 dimensional and flat.The world bluiding is decent. Nothing really special about the story it is your just normal cultivation novel with an okay system.This book is just something that you would forget after a few days.
Good story, the main character does not conform to either the stereotypical god-like villain mold, nor does he conform to the stupidly op hero mold. He seems human-like in that he makes mistakes, but at the same time, his foreknowledge should not be underestimated. All in all linri harclaw, and the soul inside him named max is a character that is human and relatable. His fellow companions are human like as well displaying flaws and mistakes that make the novel all the more compelling.
Dropped.I think this might be the first trial read novel I've dropped before even reaching the paid chapters. I'm sorry, but I seriously could not continue anymore. This is fairly similar to Library of the Heavens, which I kind of enjoyed initially but dropped after some several hundred chapters and could never get back into because frankly it was a pretty trashy novel. But to each their own, and I could understand why people liked it since the face slapping was kinda entertaining while it lasted (I dropped because it got pretty repetitive and it honestly felt like he went out of his way to make people misunderstand him). That being said, maybe I've gotten too old for that kind of writing now.Honestly reading this, it was really freaking cringey and felt pretty unrealistic. The MC has an unreal amount of arrogance and confidence in his ability that I'm not sure where it comes from (the system? his ability to see potential?). I couldn't understand why he took actions that, to me, felt pretty disadvantageous to him and I felt like there was a better way of doing these, but he seemed to prioritize short term satisfaction. In addition, I've never really liked a relationship that I consider unequal (in other words, one partner is considered lesser than the other by others - so the extraordinarily beautiful and talented one and then the untalented frog that lusts after swan meat one). From what I read so far, neither the MC nor his fiancee appealed to me at all and honestly I disliked both of them. With both the main character and the supposed female lead being like that, I really couldn't continue reading.I honestly wish this wasn't chosen. The Secret Agent (despicable and perverted MC but surprisingly very entertaining) or the Senior Brother novel (cautious MC that's quite different from the usual chinese novel MC) were both so much better. I hope either one of these will get chosen later at least, since they haven't disappeared from the trial read yet.
This story is amazing ! the characters were all very well developped, the MC and his powers are really nice, well sadly it was dropped, but who knows maybe one day the author will re-start this story or a new one with the same type of MC and change what he wants.The dark phoenix prince was an amazing story for me and i would have loved to read it until its completed (for real) but sadly such a good story ended like this when some trash become famous with the same plot and characters for millions times
A good read. Try it.For those who are not satisfied, here is a short review:Special ability is OP, with the ability to see opportunities and dangers in a 100+m radius. Even future opportunities are visible, trough the same can not be said about dangers so far. In addition not all opportunities are simple or easy to get.Story flow is very well done, very few "oh my God he is awesome" or "lets waste the readers time by having 5 random different people monologue about how awesome the MC is" moments, the few technical explanation passages are consistently short and Side-Characters which actually have a reason to be included.MC is an interesting character with a few minor flaws and not the typical suicidal lemming who is only alive because of his plot armor.World and Cultivation are logical and quite interesting so far, trough not much has already been explored.
I felt the longing and the message of the novel was delivered smoothly to me. Every word hits different and it's so deep. It moves my heart in agony. For the technicalities, separate some paragraphs and don't miss the punctuations. Great start author!
Yay i like the idea already that and who doesnt like yuri like come on it shouldnt even need To be a warning but if I guess some people dont like it and will get mad
Excellent ***** humour and tension building, hilarious wordplay and references, colourful characters, likeable protagonist and hundreds of great tips to dating and ***. Definite must read!