Good Novel with Great Potential.Worth Reading.
I really enjoyed 'The Subconscious of The Damn Mountain'! The story’s unique, with great twists and vivid scenes. Totally recommend!
story is nice, synopsis and first chapter got me hooked. Keep up the good work!
La escritura es bastante buena, y aunque no estoy muy versado en historias de transmigración de este tipo, la historia me parece que está tomando un buen rumbo, espero que siga así autor-san.
Really nice novel... keep up the good work ;3
I read it all the chapters and I can say is “keep writing, you did a good job”.
Hi guys Ivory here Kinda shameless of me to write a review on my own novel but i just wanted to drop in and say hi :) also a little more back story on our main character Kalida his name is acctually a reference to the word Calida in spanish which means hot and khalida which translates to deathless or immortal in latin. Our protag personality is a slum dwelling deviant who is both cunning and funny at times, due to that he learnt to do anything to survive in this huge industrial city. Anyway thats enough from me if you guys enjoyed the first chapter drop a like and subscribeto the novel?
review for event. Story is off to a good start, I am enjoying the tone and interactions between MC and her system. Curious to see how the new world will be and how it will shape the MC with the help of the system. Kinda weird that an amoral person is wanting a kind one. I wonder what her idea of kindness is and if that will change since she's currently grouching about having to be kind herself - I don't think someone would enjoy being attached to someone who is kind if they don't share the values. Might be a strange preconception or just a plot hook - either way you do you writer and I look forward to coming back to this story.
60 chapters in! great story! I'm hooked!
The plot seems interesting and it would be even better if sight adjustments were made. Overall I believe the story has potential. Although the Mc might need a bit work.
Great novel. thank you! ?????????????PD: there is a pretty good novel called "A Sorcerer's Journey" in the novel there is something similar to your rune systems, if you have time to read it maybe it can serve as inspiration for your next great novel, thanks for your work
I'm not a fan of thriller-mystery kinda books. However, I just loved it. The storytelling was immaculate. The way the author portrayed each character mesmerized me. I simply just loved it. Good luck ?