I love the development of the story and I am getting excited over Regis and Amber's meeting. So please.......please and PLEASE! please update more. Don't leave me hanging.
I love noir, the twin dynamic is beauty, I also love the exposition, but can you add a bit more details to the characters so we can better visualize them, like their outfit and looks
Well described ,with good storytelling I feel like I'm watching a move, great jop keep going
I really like this book! Love how the author sneaks in humor subtly while still pulling you right into his world. Feeling as though you’re right there with Dylan as he is experiencing his new life as a vampire! Definitely worth the read!
??? I want more... ??? Whooaahhhh ??? can't stop my self from imagining the characters and the story... It is really amazing... Please more... ❤️❤️❤️
Honestly, I like the story, the problem I have is how it's written. It's very hard to read this. When someone talks try surrounding the text with " instead of adding an - in front of the message. But overall, I like the rest of it. Solid characters and world-building. I recommend this story if you re-write it.
1.)A child of Senju and Uchiha that is enough to f- up everything unless he is taken to root or stolen by Orochimaru. He must be taken to root even without chakra and Zetsu would taken him during his birth maybe taken his mom before birth. 2) Senju clan and the name Senju was disbanded. I have no idea how so much OC Senju is popping up. 3) Transforming MC's clone to chakra metal sword by transformation justu? Hold up, wait a minute, something isn't right. 4) Chapters are too short and lack depth. 5) Dialogue is somewhat lifeless and low quality a.i - ish. 6) Pace is slow, too slow. you can easily skim and skip most of the chapter as far as I've read. 3-6 chapter can easily be condensed to one chapter. ************Writing Quality 3. Story Development 2. Character Design 2, Updating Stability 5, World Background 2.Writer-san your chapters are too short yet filled up with water and pace of story is too slow. MC is extremely naive to the point of being unlikeable also a little bit of pushover not an endearing quality in any kind of MC. OG Naruto has many plot holes, but your story started with a plot hole Senju father with enormous pool of chakra and contradiction Uchiha mother. Anyway with best wishes to you and your story ( At least you had the balls to write and publish you ff). Bye have fun and live happily.
it was a great experience reading this book. .. .i thought it was a bl drama. .. .but after reading I think I was wrong??. .. misha and Gabriel are not gonna be a couple ???. ..why why
A wonderful novel for hegemony from another plane.
Definitely, the author indeed noted that English is not his first language even so, he had do so great with the right diction to describe the event of this book. The world background is great and the story development is excellent. The writing technic is over all great and I easily recommend this book to everyone.
This novel had come across my radar multiple times but I always kept it in my list of books to read later. I had never really read any books on ghosts, so while it sounded interesting it wasn’t a novel that was considered my kryptonite. Come October, I finally decided to read it cause I love spooky season and I was totally in the mood for some thrills. Well, I ended up purchasing all of the chapters at once after the free ones because I became obsessed. By obsessed, I mean I finished reading up to the current chapters in three days. I would’ve finished it sooner too had I not had to work. It was just that exciting. Not gonna lie, the grammar isn’t perfect but it’s not bad enough for it to detract from the storyline or leave you confused. The story is riveting, the characters are interesting and have depth, and the ghosts are super freaky! There’s been a few scenes where I almost killed myself by dropping my phone on my face. Just so you know, this novel is primarily fantasy with romance lightly dusted on it like powdered sugar on a funnel cake. It’s there, but it’s not the main dessert. The ghosts take center stage, but you won’t even miss the romance because the main characters are in dire need of some personal growth and the female lead is just bad AF on her own. The characters have so many twists and turns, so don’t expect cliches. There are so many things that keep you engaged in the novel, which is a testament to how good of a creative writer the author is. So if you like: ☑️ a strong female lead☑️ a cute bun☑️ character growth☑️ ghosts☑️ scary stories☑️ unique storylinethen you’ll enjoy this novel.
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