So far the story has a lot of potential and I kinda enjoy the mc, I just hate the fact that during one of the beginning chapters he let himself get punched on the stomach and didn’t get revenge
intresting!! concept is very good and with those small details you can feel that the world is alive, got me hooked on the chapter one, can't wait to read more.
not bad . .
I was hooked instantly really great don’t see many pokemon stories like this keep up the great work
leaving this here for the event give this book a shot I'm sure the author would appreciate it.
great novel by don thistle amazing writting
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This is my favorite novel of the year as of right now.hopefully this gets adapted to a webnovel in the future
Really nice to read but the math is the problem? If you're okay with it then all is good. The MC is nice just kinda monotone where I'm currently at but hope it would develop more interesting characters.
Thanks for the chapter update. An isekai character to another world, killed by his own professor, seems good. Actually i just read you first chapter and due to several books that I have read, isekai is already a part of it. Im looking forward into your world building. Good luck..
He opened the purify room door.
"Ow," said Writerz.