There's an error in one of the chapter. for an example the miao clan young master bought a 4th realm demonic beast with a high bid 50k. But then on the latter chapter it was changed into a 5th realm demonic beast which is a mistake since the 5th realm demonic beast is rare and Lin mo gave the 5th realm demonic beast to Du clan by auctioning the 4th real demonic beast which the miao clan young master bought.
It's literally the same translator as wolfy and veratales.
I like the pace of the story, not too fast or too slow, no info dump. MC is very relatable and not a generic OP mad lad from the start.
It is an amazing story, I am totally hooked, Can not wait for the first part. Hopefully it will come soon. I totally recommend it. :) read it right now!
This Story is straight up amazing. Its a really creative idea and the depth of the writing really allows you to imagine for yourself. It was like watching an anime while reading a book. One thing though it doesnt seem to update as offten as everyday, but if the release dates were to be more stable then this it would get a 5 star rating from me. Go read it if you haven't now
I FORKING LOVE THIS I DONT CARE IF PEOPOE CALL MY RATING FAKE. I JUST WANNA SHOW LOVE TO THIS BOOK. SO FORK OFF WHO THINK THESE ARE GAKE AND ATLEAST READ THE BOOK!
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I love the book. Its very interesting and wonderfulIts just his updating is slowI cant wait for more chapters and see where this goes............
The story progression builds on classic 'Divine powers' system. And the setting of the main character is done pretty soon into the chapters.
There are a few grammatical errors which break immersion of reading a bit, but other than that it is a promising story.
okay so I'm not always write a review but this book somehow makes me wanna write one, but not for a good reason. there's several reason that makes me write this1. the inconsistency for the sake of the plot: I read how this was the author first take on game element story but can author make it more consistent, for example the effects of multiplying of the CCed time that somehow not trigger and the author said it's gonna be explained in later chapter, I mean you can said that's a requirement to trigger it when you first give that passive don't need add a mystery like this is a game story that bound to have explanation of the skill unless like requirements of the exp since it's related to job then I'm okay with it but skill one? yeah, I mean there's some game that have hidden mechanic for the skill but not with passive skill since it's passive. 2. next one how a game that only around for 4 years can affect real life? yeah sure you can exchange currency but it's normal but making doctor exam with game knowledge? that's kinda absurd. Unless the game affect reality and its integrated then fine. but how can game knowledge save someone life? only this two reason is enough to make it annoying yeah the writing quality is good but the world building and the consistency? (idc about there's irl stuff and such because I enjoyed but the moment you incorporate it and ruined it that's the problem you must solve)
Don’t waste your time. The third arc suddenly has the chill MC claim that his only regret in current day is being unable to kill Japanese people. Completely insane nationalism shoved into an already prematurely ended waste of a novel. Had some good ideas but failed.
I’ve got to admit, I’m not much for these types of novels, but this one is different.