His work is implementing and updating, keep it up buddy.I think you should keep your good works of art webnovel is not you stoping point buddy love you.
Very captivating, it made me remember a movie I watched. Good work author.
it is very repetitive and your mail mother f***** man character is an idiotic and arrogant b**** and he can't even think properly before taking an action any fee is his development phase even than he should be calm not doing some kind of idioting things that he has done in this chapter he does whatever comes to his mind he is an idiot not a logical and strategic thinker he is just a Brooke with the little bit of luck till now because I don't know what is going to happen is next chapters or upcoming chapters can become a good person or strategic thinker with some kind of fatal mistakes because of his f****** idiotic sheets that he is doing and if he does not change then the story is doomed to be stopped in the middle because I have seen many stories like that
interesting interesting captivating captivating
Keep going, it's good work. I really like the development of the different characters
"This the place Jieee?"
1. Ridicoulus Human I (Common)
-The Beginning
This world was created by 2 Gods, Light and Dark. Light and Dark are a Gods who have the appearance as a kid. Light like luminous figures, all of body is shrouded by a glowing light and Dark is shrouded by darkness, pure darkness.
Gin: HUH! you wanna fight?!
You're bundled up now, wait till you get older
Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming