Nice story, good job author! I like the book. I can’t help but be intrigued
nice story work and script for the book when I read
Bl? check✅ Esports? check again✅ Bl with Esports with OMEGAVERSE ??? YES I CAN ASCEND IN PEACE NOW SAYONARA EVERYONE ?️jk?? This book has my favorite genres encompassed into one. I can't even explain what this book does to me. what are you waiting for fellow pioneers and scavengers on the hunt for the peak of bl? dive head first into this book now. you WILL NEVER regret this. why? because it's just that forking good yo
I have really enjoyed reading this book, especially the comments by the viewers that are quite funny at times and has me smiling throughout the whole chapter. The feelings inside of me while Maya and Scott broke up were quite intense which is a good sign for both the writing quality the bond we have formed with the characters. In short, i really recommend giving it a read!
I like the writing style and also the characters. It's going good for now. I think it's going to be more interesting in future.
Great novel so far but I am a little confused about the romance of we get it straight mc likes girl with big chest that’s why he doesn’t like the other girl but in the novel detail you give the other girl is the FL if I’m guessing it’s going to be a slow romance right please till me.
Short Short Review.The MC is hopeless without the system and pretty much "Huh's" at every single things.Like he uses "Huh?" at average of 3 per chapter. it can go up to 8 to 10 in a single chapter
I want to see how the story moves for further
Interesting start but plot is extremely slow and at some point almost non existent for 100+ chapters. It’s quite disappointing that the story doesn’t have a good flow.
Lovely beginning ... please update more!
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overall the story is good I'm giving it a 4.0 rating as i need to see more in order to change my mind