it's not bad, I would say, but it honestly feels like the fantasy of an 8th grader, he's this normal guy until whoa he wakes up with powers and then he goes and wins against his bullies and he just hurts all the people who try and bully him. If that's your cup of tea, go for it. Otherwise, just look away.
Nice one author ... I just added it to my library
A review on this uh??? Well..............All I have to say is I love GREEK MYTHOLOGY AND I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO WHERE THIS GOES. Pretty decent ever since though. Got me hooked all the way to the point where.......*sobs* I gotta pay for chapters..........
At ch 30. Novel is okay. Well written but not my cup of tea. I don’t like the idea that MC is modern Earthling reincarnated but is willing to become a pet. I mean I understand that he had no choice at first but after he was freed for four years, he still willing go back to become a pet...like wtf...?! He has a system that literally helps make him stronger and stronger just by eating and he willingly wants to be a slave....kinda disappointing.
I love the plot development and character design. Aster is so cute I love how you brought his struggles to light. keep it up author ? you got yourself a loyal reader
Hmm, can't say much as it's only the first chapter, but so far it's good. I like how the author is giving a different personality. I think MC broke the 4th wall and stuff
I like the fact that it's a current novel,not like those 90s novels
Personally, I liked the prologue wayyy better than the actual story. [Sorry Author ?]. Also I’ll be stealing some parts of the prologue for my own story ??.Anyways, I am no one to judge as I haven’t even read the first few chapter yet. So I’ll just give it 4.5 stars
Pls could you learn fo update yournovels in time it motivates people or readers to read
This story has me totally invested, I really like the portrayal of mental illnesses, the background is really great, and even if the MC doesn’t really talk, you can still understand him and I think that is really great. The only mistakes I have noticed is just a few words one word before/after where they should be, and one where the wrong form of word was used, overall this story is really great and has good potential!
Someone from behind the stage appeared.
"What is wrong Nicolás? Were you finally asked to kill us the Thornton? Did you have no way out this time?" Asked June, Nicolás shook his head.