average system xianxia transmigration... nothing really new or outstanding in this one... plus it is completed. compared to trash webnovel has been putting out lately this one can be considered masterpiece... and it has ok translations...
I liked the novel first chapter had a good hook. Keep writing and improving good luck...................................................................
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go author you can do this ill wait for the next chapter even if it take months,just don't drop this ,there so much hypnosis genre here but so little are nice
Anyone got the raws to this novel?.
No joke, one of the best novels I have read and currently only 25 chapters are out, eager to follow author for moream not bot nor am I a sussy saka ?
Dropped after around 30 chapters. It's just like, everything about this is so generic, every single character just has a template personality. literally Sadistic fighter, Tough cop, Grumpy teenager, and cute little sister. He can't kill anyone if it's not for money cause then he won't be the ideal assassin his little sister wanted him to be which is just beyond me. It's so stupid and he's not even an assassin anymore as in he's not a pro, he has no 'customers' and it honestly feels like something that's purely meant to increase the word count. MC hardly bothers hiding his abilities, numerous people already know his identity and capabilities and even his gym trainer knows something is weird with him. The cultivation system is nonexistent, there is mana, inner energy, and spells. For some unknown reason, he feels that he should learn how to harness that inner energy although it's apparently less pure than the mana he already uses. TL: DR - Cringe lines, non-existent combat system. Wouldn't recommend it to anyone interested in anything beyond a children's show level of plot.
The story flow is on point and the character development is also amazing,, it was a bit sad at but I love it. It is is an amazing read. Good job author.
Writing quality - It has a few errors in the chapters but its easily ignorable or you may not even notice them.
Stability of Updates - Its about once a week, which for a kingdom building novel is not anywhere close to enough. Especially since the chapters are REALLY short and sometimes have very little going on in them.
Story development - In 13 chapters so far id say the story has advanced plenty. BUT this is entirely because of time skips and has nothing to do with the actual writing. Basically the chapters are the MC doing something minor like a tournament or summoning characters or thinking about his plans again and again. Then the story has a time skip and all of a sudden he has a fort built or a spy network all around or a deal done with MAJOR characters. Basically all the things we wanted to read about were summoned up in a checklist after a time-skip and the things we don't actually care about or effect the story majorly are mentioned (though even then it is in very little detail).
Character Design- There isn't much to say about the character, he isn't bad nor good. We know little about his past but that honestly is fine. We don't see any character development probably because the chapters are too short to pull something like that off. Or maybe its because the System does EVERYTHING for him. I wouldn't be surprised if the system has a character he can summon to wipe his behind. Due to the system being OP we never see the MC do anything worth while. Maybe when the MC gets his kingdom this will change but I bet it will only cause the system to become MORE OP.
World Background - Its the GOT world so its already built for him so its hard to mess this up. And he doesn't mess it up, he seems to know what he is talking about. He did add more population into the world which I like very much and hopefully this has a Major role in future events.
Overall - Its worth a read and wont take you more than 2 hours to get through all the chapters so far (if you are a slow reader and like reading the wiki when he mentions locations and people to learn more).
Frankly pleasantly surprised.I have read dozens of xianxia and this one is by far in my top 3.It changes a lot compared to other just already by the fact that there are 2 mc. Following the history of the 2 sets is very interesting.Not much to say except go read the story.Author I see you haven't published a chapter for a while on this story... Do you want to abandon this story?
The book does a great job in its grammar, and the story sort of starts off with a bang right then and there, but also still describing the characters.
Okay! As the author, I will give this one-star review because I want to. ????Let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! ?????