I really enjoyed writing this book, and i hope you will enjoy reading it just as much ;)
------------------------------------------------------------------------------Chapter 1 is an amazing chapter perfect blend of fantasy and urban the plot line is amazing too can't wait to read future chapters.
So far so good. I'm 19 chapters in, they are decent length though, so we already we have a good amount of info and a good foundation for the story and the plot (+characters and backgrounds). The writing quality and grammar are good and it has a real life /real problem drama, even though set in werewolf world. I like that it's more realistic as well, as I have thought of actually writing one just because of wanting it to be more realistic to how things might be if werewolves really existed. so I appreciated that aspect as well. Wasn't looking to take on another book (esp where I am getting to push myself to work on mine own) but it got me hooked. let's hope it stays that way, and that is not another 1000+ chapter story with too many details and random side stories or drawn out scenes. We don't need to read about every work day ?. (which it doesn't seem like it will go that way, but at end of the day it's not my story, write it how you want). So Keep up the good work!!
I love this romance. At some moments of the scenes, I feel like my own real job experience. But I've got different ending of course
honestly it's too early to tell but what i can say is that I am enjoying the story ?
great this is high class yuri for yuri lovers....
This man is starting this villain arc after he got rejected bro cause this first chapter is so peak ?
Transmigation+Eroge Game+ Yandere Girls+ Ince stuous Tendency+ Beastmen +Loli + Older Women + Other Dangerous Heroines + Beastwomen = Woahhh fckng awesome!!
author did u drop this? when will u fix the chs?
Really well written story ,kept me hooked all the time. Keep uploading author nim. Ty~
Its hard to write this given I’ve been here since chapter 20, but I’m done. I’m not going to spoil the plot, but I am going to list the major problems. 1. Over the course of the novel the ‘system’ becomes an afterthought. It’s a common problem amongst novel’s that use a system with balance, and large bricks of text becoming harder to manage. It ends up getting updated once every hundred chapters. 2. Eiro becomes more, and more 1 dimensional as the story progresses. Without giving specifics Eiro loses his initial wrathful charm as it gets replaced with a more karen like anger. 3. Dice goes for way too much consistently causing random important plots to be dropped, and filler added. At chapter 600 3 giant plots have been seemingly forgotten that immediately come to mind. This compounds with the massive roster that leaves many characters thin. This all slowly ate at me for the last hundred chapters, and I’m dropping it now. Goodluck, hopefully Dice fixes this stuff so you can enjoy his work more than me.
"He won't care and just smiling hearing the ridicoulus human talking that thing they were smart, but what they know is an illusion that can be true or false.