Planning and plotting of story is good. Author has invested a lot of time and effort. Story comes out to be good a read. Would expect author to release more chapters. Grammar is quite okay. Please continue writing.
Love it so much. 11/10; better than perfection. Every aspect about it is perfect, yet it somehow keeps getting better. The chapters come out fast, but it's so good that I have to re-read while waiting for the next chapter of those heavenly divine words to come out. Some of the chapters I read a lot over and over again ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) if you get my meaning. It's easy to see that the author puts a lot of effort into this divine novel.
overall nice read :)story is going really smoothly (as far as i read), and although it's relatively calm pace i enjoy reading it.maybe not to the point of binge reading (as it's setting its own pace) it in one go, but definitely reading it whenever you feel like it and want to relax :)
this novel is perfect. story development is absoulutley great. world background is perfect. I hope writer won't stop because this novel is totaly perfect . I have only one regret and that one is Istarted too early and now I can't wait new chapters :)
Okayyy! The story is too much interesting, as it make me feel curious about the MC. The story is really well described and author put a lot of affection to the story and synopsis. Great job author! Keep it up! I envy you!
First of if can't take less jokes or echi scenes don't read this novel. ?----If you can... You Should read it! Author-san has perfected daos of twisty-turny plots, shameless and grandpa masters. Lewd masters. The pursuit in the dao of harem creates waves of humor all while MC fails in this regard ?(so far). The humor is fantastic and author-san trolls the world, pop culture, and mythology with creativity.
I just want to say that this novel is really nice and very different from what i have read so far. I have really enjoyed it and i am so happy to have found this rare treasure.
It's really good. Can you please update more chapters?I want to know more about this novel.Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I'm gonna be honest here. The story is really interesting. While attracting the readers, it provides an enjoyable read. However, there are some things that were annoying. I'm going to give a review now:─Writing Quality 5/5Word Usage: Let me give you a piece of advice here: DON'T try to use different words and phrases UNTIL you've thoroughly understood the usage of that word/phrase in a real sentence. Using synonyms is fine to not have repetitive words; however, if you've not still come to understand where, when, or how to use it, it would be better to not use it at all and go for the same word you know how to use.Word Repetition: Some words get used too much in every paragraph. For example, I got annoyed hearing "her" every few seconds while reading. I checked until chapter 12 and there were like +600 times that you used "her
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realy food story, i love the MC because he Is so funny ?Writing Is comprensibile but some times autor mix some wordsstory realy interessing and i love technology.carachters arent bad but im' not an espert so i cant judge updating Is good and i Hope autor dosnt drop thisbackground Is about a mana awakened earth i like the concept.4.2 stars good job ????
is this novel a dropped work?.................