Beautiful <3 i love it so much
Bro he's always hide his strength and because of that there is more arrogant young master's fight scene then needed.
While reading up to chap13, an idol group came into my head.
Being replacement for someone or singers thats pulled out from the broadcast.
Recording the groups behind-the-scene ( while in their public sched)
2 yrs been gone since debut but no, music show award... these are what makes me think of the group ( im a fan, btw
i just want to say it that read it no words just read it is just that good that you don't want to miss this,
1st it's plot, it is not what you think it's different from all the other stories that you that read
2nd mc is great
3rd mc has multiple personality which both very interesting and different
and conclusion read it
Other than the updates problem, the story is great. I saw other comments, I mean yes he is not outright villain like Fang Yuan and Zhou Fan. But it is still good on it's own.
There are only few chapters, so can't say how it will be in future. As of now, it's decent one. At least my cup of tea.
Yo good with, keep it going my man, good luck
The Novel has a promising plot with likable characters. They feel lifelike. someone you could relate with. The use of real-world locations makes imagining the story better. Although it's not perfect but still I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
most everything was average and cliche. That, in and of itself, isn't a bad thing, so long as the characters are well developed and the writing skillful.Unfortunately, both the characters are writing quality are bad. The writing quality was mildly irritating, with the bad Grammer and exposition being handled very poorly.The characters were by far the worst part of this book, and the reason I dropped it. The characters didn't feel one but like people; rather, they were one dimensional and seemed to lack any complexity or realism.For example, the all men except for MC are villains, irresponsible, or lusty pigs. One girl (at the beginning) was the vain, big breasted onee-chan that instantly falls for the main character when he saves her. MC is a do gooder with a shop. He failed to be interesting, at least to me.
If he doesn’t choose the third option, then I’m gonna be disappointedOther 2 choices are useless in front of real hard cash
Well this book is nice, the way of writing could be improved and update stability could be improved too,But that aside the story is actually something fresh, the characters are unique, their is way too much potential in it and am curious where it will go next.Thanks for the story author, keep writing give me more updates!!
Pain
i realy like it. it combines the edgy calculative edgy mc but him actually being a good guy not some selfish mc who would do whatever he wants and kill whoever he wants and only saves those that are usefull and woudint bother saving a guy who wouldint be usefull to him.