Aside from a few minor mistakes, the story is going well and it's quite interesting to read✨✨
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Hey, author here! First things first, No there will not be NTR but there will be a little Yuri. This novel if you couldn't guess was inspired by "I Got A Cheat Ability In A Different World, And Become Extraordinary Even In The Real World". Basically, the guy inherited a house, became overpowered, and is now a prodigy. However, I wasn't really a fan of the anime as I thought the main character was kind of an idiot ? and I decided to make this novel erotic cause why not Now there will be a lot of "plot" and I mean a looot but that being there will be an actual story but it will be extremely slow. Hope you enjoy.(Also the start will just him leveling up and getting a glow up)
If you like a good read, this is a pretty good read. Wished there was more to read!!! Please update soon!!?
As someone who's a student myself as I both hate and love math from time to time (mostly hate it though now), It does seem quite interesting reading the first few chapters,,,,But to make the guy who hates math synergy with you did the poor character dirty,,,,,rip vector,,,,
I love fantasy books like this, it keeps me glue to my screen. ?
So far it's a good story. i really like the pacing. looking forward to more chapters ?
Its a pretty solid book. Not alot of grammatical errors which is great. Story is pretty solid, characters are generally interesting. Sometimes the plot can be aggravating, but it makes up for it with good moments.The biggest flaw in the book in my estimation, is the fights. Every detail of the fight is painstakingly described. Now I suppose if that is your thing, you enjoy that and more power to you. However, I find it to be tedious and cumbersome. When you tell the story of a fight to someone you dont describe every tension of the muscles to them, why? Generally because you dont remember, adrenaline blurs the details. The other reason is because the point of the fight is not the fight.A fight is a vehicle by which the story advances, spending half the chapter, sometimes multiple chapters on a fight, actually dulls the tension and lessens the payoff. Make no mistake I recommend the book. Its a good read with good characters, the flaw I raised is one of the few it has so give it a try.
honestly where do you authors come up with the weird ideas for these types of novel. A "pregnancy system"? seriously. at this point I want be surprised if there's on as baby daddy system
Writing quality needs a bit more work, and the story development too, i need to see more to change my mind, other than that love this novel and would highly recommend
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I've watched a lot of anime and read not too much mangas, this is the first Light Novel I read and I have great expectations. ngl i like the first chapter is great the second chapter is decent. uhh i also like Yumiko personality i hope there's more character this good written (at least for me is good written.)