Buen libro, se puede leer diariamente!10/10Genera ganas de seguir leyendo y expectativa con esperar los nuevos capítulos, a los que les gusta este tipo de género pueden aprovecharlo ?
Need more chapters . İts very slow btwi hope u will write more chapters:() Jjjjjhhjhhhhjhhhhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj.......................
Soo my review should be the first one from the reader.In these 28 chapters, my judgement for this novel is 100 !!!The story is about apocalypse, but unlike other novel, there are no superpowers involved so far, which makes this novel very interesting. How do they survive the apocalypse without any superpower?The mc is not a saint, but he is a good natured man and smart, and apparently not a sporty person. But well he is good at fighting so that justify how he survive these 28 chapters. Additionally, the girls character are defined and interesting and thats why i rate this novel 100/100
It's a really good novel, if anything should be said about it is, It's really well written, has a good, and more importantly, continous development. it doesn't falter, and stuff happens and gets done. however, as there are few chapters where characters interact with each other, there is a lack of knowledge we as readers have about them. but it will solve itself in the next few chapters, I believe. the same goes with the world background, although you can tell it's almost the same world as where we live. In the beginning, there is some stuff hinting that this world has a supernatural/magical/fantastical side to it, but it just hasn't appeared yet. this makes the novel lack its own unique approach. although it isn't bad to (sometimes) not have a unique approach, I feel that this novel could benefit very much from it.maybe make it so that some specific people can use magic, and there are the typical magical races, but they are hidden in the Amazon Jungle, or they are in a deep slumber waiting for the so called "awakening of spiritual energy". there are many more things that can be done.author, you can freely use my ideas if you want, I can also give you more if you need/want. just comment under any of my comments or even under this review. you can also contact me in Discord @NaruSenku. I'm always willing give a helping hand to authors.
I smiled and shoved an unwanted slice of meat into my mouth. Killian eyed me. I never said a word in his direction or acknowledged his gaze on me.
Dark took the knife and scratched his hand and then the blood flowed into the cauldron.
Tears ran down her face as she peered into the studio door. She can't help but feel as if her heart had shattered into a million pieces as she saw him kissing her.
"Shut yourmouth!" Naruto screamed, "You've killed hundreds of people, maybe even thousands, and you think that that's what makes you some kind of savior or god?! You did this because you're a pathetic creature who's so wrapped up in his own bullshit he couldn't even accept that fact that there might be more than one of you!"
Only shooting stars break the mold
Laura was in the middle of tutoring Emma Jackson during lunch, remember? Something about mathematics and circle theorems. And then you strode in like you were on a horse, looking brighter than you usually did.
And all that glitters is gold
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running