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don't read it MC is super beta scared of everyting if he don't outlevel enemy by 10 times he will run away STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA
Apart from the parts that are left unexplained which give some readers a hard time understanding the book, I would say that the book is awesome! the plot is sell defined with interesting premises. The grammar is okay and simple to read.
Can anyone tell me how to actually read any of these pilot reads? It says for you to read them and then make a judgement based on that. Yet I cant read a single one.
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Just trying to write a story and no story is perfect. Hope you enjoy it nonetheless and feel free to add feedback here or in the chapters! Been writing for a few years now but I still consider myself a newbie so go easy.
Great story overall. It has an interesting plot. Characters are fleshed out and not onedimensional. Although the protagonist has a cheat (system), it doesn't immediately make him the strongest being in existence, it makes him work for it. The system in this novel is also quite unique(At least I haven't read / found a similar one).But as always, I can't make a decision for you. Go ahead and give it a try, since if you're reading the reviews it means you are interested in this book.
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I usually don't really like character like Rufus, but the author does describe this one really well and I find this great. The other characters are well written too, and they are really likeable.
The writing quality is not great but pretty good.
the story is really interresting and with a good updating stability, I will follow this one !
Keep up the good work !
well I started it as a routine system story, but oh boy! this is a hidden gem, a definite for those who love martial arts stories.a definite 5 ?
amazing read..I like it ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Unfortunately, author forgot that amnesia doesn't make someone stupid. I could have been a good novel, but I can't stand reading the story of someone just being dumb.
A wonderful novel. I hope it gets chosen!!!
