The characters are well defined and the interaction with the setting and worldbuilding is top notch. I believe the story should tell be short lived and extend towards at least 100 chapters
The background of the story is pretty interesting, I didn't expect that. It change from the usual novel with basic background so it's quite refreshing to say the least.The writing is pretty good and easy to understand. The grammar is probably the sole problem but it's something that you improve overtime so that's okay.Anyway good job author :).
So far so good. It feels slow paced but the development in the plot seems good capturing most of the details. The grama is good definitely a good recommendation for most of the readers who desire new style of fantasy
Nice work author keep it up and keep uploading ❤️?
Nice book. I'm looking forward to reading the remaining part.It's entertaining and has a lot of potential.
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As Issei inched closer and closer he began to see Gabriel's resolve to break it was the worst thing for a angel to fall and Issei had a few sexual ways to make it happen.
"Ho ho ho, dont worry he won't do that, and take it easy, you won't be crazy anymore. Because going crazy will be the thing you fear the most." The doctor immediately grinned at me, and I replied with a flat face.
"Give me another potions, Jester."
We can indeed see them, but we cannot touch or do anything related to them.
"Discipline daddy," Yunjae reminded him. "The little boy did something bad so I'll leave him to you, daddy," his wife added before winking and mouthing "AJA!"
"My intuition thinks so, and she's right on you all," she said, looking at the three in front of her.