looks promising ??may be.but author is really lazy, his chapters are too short try to improve word count if possible.
Great Nobel, as you all know this is not a simp type of novel but a novel where the mc grows up evil, he’s pretty cunning and the world building is Very good, however of there is 1 thing the story is missing it’s maybe to make the heros he’s against more cunning otherwise great story so far plus the caracter is still going through some caracter development as he makes some mistakes here and there but corrects on them later and so on so he’s not the perfect smart man and can still be maniplated but it’s part of his development go be truly wise and powerful
Story is good overall, just lacking world building and mc being too much of a simp.
Stop! Please stop! Please ...
"Oh well then my Lord, should I prepare the tools and ingredients for the creation?" Lilith asked.
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
Stop this madness ....
"The Physcopath Vs The Normal person"
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The world reprise...
They got the best bowling lane and prepared to play. Harry actually wore clothes for once, wearing what seemed to be a team shirt and pants, but he refused to put on shoes. Rebecca however got light up rainbow shoes that seemed impossible to ignore, and she convinced Jasper to wear a orange version that was a lot less bright. Sophie however was too busy trying to beat another girl in a dancing game to bowl. They kept tying so eventually they just did a no rules dance battle. It got crazy fast with kids shooting laser pointers to add effect. The group watched for a bit and laughed before they started bowling. As usual, Rebecca went first, managing to hit a spare. Then Harry went, managing 9 pins thanks to a split. Next was Jasper. He breathed a bit and then rolled a strike. Then the next round began. Rebecca hit 6 pins this time and blamed that someone had used lights to mess with her. Harry scolded her but then took up her argument when he went down with two gutter balls. Once again Jasper was up and astonishingly, he hit yet another strike. It was then Harry realized he had made a mistake.
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