good reading story the author is good in writing
. ............................ A good novel ....
I love this book! It sounded interesting but once I started reading it I couldn't stop. I caught up in two days and lost a lot of sleep which should tell you how good the book is.
My book is amazing and awesome, why can't you giys just appreciate it by writing a comment, or just add it to your library, I am not shameles for asking this from you, besides, it's not as if I'm asking for power stones. Just push that button, and add my book to your library, or just write a comment, either way. Ethan would really appreciate it. and if your review is good enough, I'll find a way to put your name in the book. limited for one week. so get reviewing.
I read till chapter 72, and i think i can't go further . When i started reading this , i had high hopes. The reasons were :- The pretty good writing( nothing revolutionary but definitly better than most books out there.)- The many possibilities of developement for the plot - The fact that the transition from a cowardly character to a confident one for the Mc was well done.- Although this novel takes some elements of another( bloodline system, which is not so great either) , it slowly finds its own way.- The other voice of the system which added a layer of mystery .But that was all. And some point, as time goes by, one find himself/ herself unable to continue because some problems are too obvious to be ignored : - The pace is horribly slow.It is not a bad thing per se . However when NOTHING substential happens to the Mc , it just makes the book boring.- What is even the Mc 's motivation?So far i don't see one. Him not having any clear ambition makes it so he doesn't go beyond the " i'm an author's good idea " to become a " i'm an author's good idea who works because I FEEL REAL " . Harry is an Mc because the author made him so. If he was a side character in some other book , People wouldn’t even care about him , because he is not interesting.This applies to other characters as well. So far , none of them seems a little bit interesting or real.- The story doesn't progress and it feels like there are no dangers or difficulties for the Mc(A competition is approaching but there's no tension at all ). The world building isn't doing much better , as it is nothing new and we don't even know that much about the world yet.- The author's writing is also a problem.Although the grammar and the vocabulary are good( it's nothing extraordinary but it's better than most of the novels on this app), the author has a serious issue with emotions.The tension, the fear , the sadeness... it's like the author has troubles showing emotions. It is not so evident in the earlier chapters. But as one goes further , it is more and more glaring.That's why every interactions feels so inconsistent and not relatable at all.Besides , i myself do not like it when the Mc dwells on sadness and regrets. But the author could have shown at least that Harry( even though he said the contrary) deep down, cares for his family. It should have been shown( or told ) a bit that it hurts him that they didn’t even searched for him when he moved out . What i mean is that the author could have add some complexity to the characters' emotions which would help making them appear real and human-like.Moreover, the chapters aren't that long .72 chapters appears to be a lot but it isn't ( for that book).Overall, this novel isn't bad but just average . I'm so disappointed because so much more could have been done .
Awesome novel ? The story is different from what I usually read so it's refreshing to find something interesting and well written. I recommend you read it and encourage the author since it's well deserved ?
Vel is the best, and this novel deserves more recognition, a gem truly. 4.6/5 good work author keep it up and update regularly please ??
Overall a disappointing read. Standard transmigration novel where the MC arrives in a world based on a Eroge game and of course he is the villain.The story itself was just to long in development, starting at him arriving at 5 years of age, but it dragged on through school years etc. after chapter 41 I threw it in. Initially the MCs (villain) goal was to save the heroines and sub-heroines from bad endings if not selected by the protagonist, think it was 4-5 Heroines and 3 sub-heroines, when out of the blue comes another transmigrator who also knows of this game and they team up splitting the girls between them. Mind you, both transmigrators are still young, oh and the second transmigrator is a girl (but maybe past life a guy, no idea). So 2 young kids are plotting, even discussing murder and later the MC actually incinerated a number of homeless bums. Yeh he prevented a future event happening but in my thoughts if he knew what was to happen then im pretty sure there were other ways to get around this episode. Still it happened and it really was kinda offputting.Anyways, the story was, in my mind, nothing exciting and read almost like a child’s story. I forget that a lot of Japanese novels tend to be rather formal and stiff in their delivery, which didn’t do this any favours. It was simply to childish and failed to deliver something that can capture a readers attention.Tl;dr - Try elsewhere for something more engrossing.
The character introduction is like watching a beauty contest. name and interests listed out, then next person.
the AI (Artificial Intelligence) robot that was equipped by the NASA. Artificial
"You know i have problem that make me gay, but I don't feel so gay."
"Let's welcome Rioy Kiyoshi," said the person who was holding an object that could enlarge the sound.