This was a very, very good story, but you should consider chapter 48 to the .As two chapters were released after that with a BS time, skip no explanation as to why, and claimed amnesia.It hasn’t been updated since those two last chapters.(Time skip without warning is one of the fastest ways to ruin a story)
The story is seemingly well thought out, the world building is decent, it has an easy flow when it comes to reading it. The characters could be fleshed out more but the main character is basically a blank slate so I can't really complain... There's minor errors in every chapter regarding the writing quality but it's pretty readable for the most part.
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?????Hello author-nim! I am here with a seriously thought out review, as I believe it is given time I review the story. This story is probably one of my favorites. Although this story is one of my favorites, I will not just give a brainless review with 5-stars. This review consists of my real views and tips/advice on how this story could be improved for future readers reading experiences. ??????? ℚ??????In my opinion the author's grammar, punctuation and word forming could be greatly improved. A lot of sentences are either missing words or worded terribly. Sometimes irrelevant sentences are put together instead of being seperated with a full stop. Originally I was going to give a 3-star for writing quality. However, because it wasn't completely unreadable, I gave it a 4-star. ????? ???????????For story development, I decided to rate it a 5-star. So far, from what I have read. The story development is good, it isn't too fast paced and it explains quite a few things. It shows the main character's process of returning to the same power of his previous life. The storyline/plot is very interesting and entertaining. I thoroughly enjoyed read this story so far.ℂ???????? ??????Character design, 2-star! Why? 1. There was almost no introduction to the main character at the beginning of the story. 2. Barely any explanation was made about his past life and history/background. 3. It was also unclear whether his name was the same as his current life in the past (I had to clarify with the author on this topic). ???????? ?????????I give the updating stability a 5-star. The author updates quite often. Most of the time 2 chapters are uploaded in one update. I am very satisfied with the upload times and chapters.????? ??????????World background is fairly decent. Although not much is explained in the beginning. I let it slide as the world background is later explained in more detail. 4-stars for world background.?????Hopefully author-nim doesn't find this review too harsh...(• ▽ •;)????? ℝ?????4-stars
An interesting combo of gaming and 'new yet artificial world' combined with seemingly survival gam, although the characters are interesting with peculiar names ngl. Excited to see what happens next, however the rules are scary ngl, permanent death and non-permadeath. Like excuse me, don't keep us hanging like this!
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Love got novels. Thanks and go more chapters. Interesting idea with kingdom build. But so slow new chapters. Ehh. Wait more more more chapters and empire build. But pls don't give him 10 girls harem it's shame)) 2-4 for emperor maximum
This is my first time writing a review. Part of it is actually from the EXP hehe. However, your work is really good bro. I have just added your novel into my Library. Keep up the good work and update more chapters for me.
I love the cover and the way the book draws you in, making you want to read it more and more. Honestly really good writing from chapter one and the plot can bee seen on good foundation by summary. World building is really hard to make and understand but it is done beautifully here.
i regreted buying this novel. the mc is just plain stupid even if he needs to hide his identity to his fiancé he doesn't need to hide it from his friends, especially his housemate who doesn't know anyone in town, then her problem will be solved easily. so stupid.
Alright, here’s my comprehensive review!Writing Quality- a solid 7/10, really good, although there are quite a few grammatical errors + small things like ‘phoenix’ instead of phoenix, but those could be resolved pretty easily, and the author actually does it when you let him know in chap comments.Updating Stability- The first chap was 6 days ago, the novel has 20 chapters. I give 5 stars for updating daily, so extra points too.Story Development- Surprisingly good. Cliche done right. The only thing im worried about is Arrogant young masters, 6/10Chara Design- 9, the siblings’ interactions are fun to watch, and the princess actually is interesting.World BG- There has been close to nothing on it yet, the default I give when that’s happened is a 4/5
so i have bought all the chapters out so far (60 chapters) and i have to say, so far its pretty good everything is great so far, the mc is very intelligent and he has so far been very good at planning everythin gout with his future knowledge and is unlike most reincarnated mcs in which they usually just give up at some point bc the future has changed to much and now just goes with the flowits also refreshing to see that the mc actually gets in trouble here and there and doesnt have any super strong op future character that he would later need to save come help him out of the blue(so far)at this point in time id say i would continue to support this story and would very much like to see where it could go in the future so i would like to reccomend it to any who are curious and would like to give it a try