The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
You did a great job. This is the concept really I like because we can relate with our daily lives. Would love to get more and more chapters!!!!!
This is to inform potential readers what to expect: (And Q&A for readers)1. OP MC that has to grow. He isn't the strongest from chapter 1. He continues to grow and with each awakening, he gets relatively more OP.2. Plot and puzzles. There will be some obvious hints along the way and a few obscure ones. If you can piece them together, then you can anticipate parts of upcoming plot.Some event in the beginning could come back in the end. Actions have consequences.3. Characters: Varian is a strong person. Despite that, he'll have his moments of weakness. Not just in a physical sense but as in emotional.Other characters have their own backstory and they have the reasons to act the way they do. Even the most hated character has a backstory that shaped them.4. World: It's revealed slowly. There will be foreshadowings.Use this review for Q&A. I'll try to answer as many as I can.
same story already on pilot read I can create perfect accidentstory had potentialbut it's boring it looks like fan made with putting all clique together
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Writing quality 5/5story development 4/5character design 5/5updating stability 1/5 (1y and still no update)world background 4/5UPDATE PLSSSSSSSSSSSS
so confused, why the chapter is soo slowly to realse, need fast new chapter
story is interesting and want to see more one thing that could be worked on is character descriptions because i dont really have a clear image of mc or the girls
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First, writing quality. Its not good. Its readable, but as everything in this book it degrades as the book goes on. The grammar is all over the place.Cant really say much about updates, since I just binged 260 chaps. But doesnt look too bad.(this part may contain some spoiler, but I dont name anything specific.)Story... horrible. The first part is very nice, a lot of world building and focus on magic, somtimes some romantic scenes with his wife, and at some point he gets a second girl. So yeah, its ******** harem. But later on it just turns into badly written sex every single chapter and at some points the story just straight up repeats itself. Just SAY that his "essence" can heal everything magic related. It starts as a nice magic novel with some sex and romance every now and then and after 250 chaps its a badly written ero novel that sometimes justifies why he gets a new woman. Author if you read this, a harem with more than like 5 people just loses any sort of romance and is a plain ****feast. Which is fine, but then make it sound like its a ero novel and not a fantasy one.Character are the same as story, they are pretty nice in the beginning and get shallow in the end, World background as well, but it got built pretty nicely in the beginning. All in all, badly written, story degrades, has some inconsistencies every now and then, but the story itself had potential. It was nice until the like 3rd wife came.