why did ya drop the first version???????
I liked this series.i read this authors fan fic in past. When i say he wrote a novel i gave a try to it.and it's really good.You better give a chance to it
A Must-Read for Romance & Fate Lovers! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐I absolutely loved Eclipsed by Fate! From the very first chapter, I was hooked by the deep emotions and gripping storyline. The characters feel so real, and their journey kept me on edge the entire time. The way fate plays a role in their love story is beautifully written—heart-wrenching yet so satisfying.Nephthys_Selene does an amazing job blending romance, mystery, and a touch of the supernatural. The pacing is perfect, with just the right amount of drama and surprises to keep things interesting. I laughed, I cried, and I couldn’t stop turning the pages.If you love stories about destined love, intense emotions, and unexpected twists, this book is for you! I’m definitely looking forward to reading more from this author. Highly recommend!
Its a good novel that has a mix of mechs with cultivation. MC doesn't mindlessly stomp around going to seek fights as he manage to settle a situation without violence on his behalf. Looking forward to more. Villians on the other hand seem one dimensional so far though
This novel is nothing new, there are many of this type now... The MC transmigrates into the body of an extra hated by the family and must deal with all the difficulties that come with it. The period in which this "abuse" occurs is not long (35 chapters more or less) and not too hard so it is easily overcome... The quality of writing is simple but effective and the characters, despite not having who knows what past, are well characterized and appear "alive". This means that if the novel had no defects or at least they were few, reading would be pleasant and captivating for the most part but unfortunately this is not the case and most of the time the reader is left wondering: why? I don't want to touch on the subject of revenge or how or with whom he will want to take it since it is still in progress and I won't even comment on the dense isekai protagonist trait that he has even after being stabbed in the back (I had taken some privileged chapters to see the reaction at least to that: disappointment) ... However the biggest problem of the novel is the MC chained by having to necessarily be on par with the others since he never uses his brain or his power in order not to make him OP...Let me explain:-The MC from the first to the last fight practically uses only the sword ... is he sword god ? No and he is not even talented. His bloodline would allow him to create an ideal "character" by sacrificing traits of his ego and in addition he would become stronger at a disproportionate rate ... Does he do it? Only once in a desperate situation and sacrificing the first things that came to mind ... It would be enough to sit down and understand everything he can sacrifice without substantially affecting his person to make himself stronger but in 8 years he hasn't done it, ever ;-His bloodline always allows him to learn the skills of the monsters he kills but even after 2 years of C-rank portals he doesn't learn any of them or at least he doesn't use them as if this trait (OP) was forgotten;-He having knowledge of the novel could learn and use the darkness element but in 8 years it is not even mentioned after introducing it at the beginning as a way to become stronger quickly;-His magic never used and we don't even know how many and which affinities he has unlocked since he should have had as many as possible to absorb monsters of different elements;-Finally his summoning ability that is not used when he could only attribute it to his bloodline ...The exam chapters are damn frustrating to read... seeing a potentially OP MC having to fight because he doesn't use any of his traits and in the end even betrayed without reaction... All this leaves only a bitter taste, what a shame.
THIS IS A RANK 1 STORY MADE BY THE RANK 1 AUTHOR
I Love it ?I have a lot of work to do but I just started this book and I don't want to stop
This novel has a lot of potential, it's well written and the explanations are also easily understandable. updates are regular. if this continues this will become a big novel.
Wow! It is a very refreshing story so far! At first I was thinking it was going to be like those stay at home survival against the disasters type, but as I continued, it was different from most of the others I've read so far! I look forward to the rest and wish you luck on this journey of creation.
hmmm well that's a good piece well done Author
I got a chance to check out your book, and it amazing! Your creativity really shines through, and I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. I’m so proud of you!! keep up the great work and keep writing awesome stories
It's a nice read 8 outta 10 could use some improvements like more dialogue and more descriptions of the characters outfits there is some minor errors grammatically but overall its a solid story I have faith it's gonna improve long term.