Great way to start, looking forward to read more chapters ?
i like it so far I can't wait for more .
The beginning if the novel was good, but from the start of the meeting with the senior of another era, it has go down form my view. The next thing is that he has not the right behavior of his yung body and the middel old soul. The last think ist the fast cultivation tempo of the boy with the badest spirtroot of the world. (With no extra things for cultivation.)(Logic???)
Very good story I liked everything except the tournament good luck author and again sorry ? ✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅
It's a good story with an interesting plotline. The story development was pace rather slowly, but it suits the plot well. Every scene was unfolding with a good description, and it was well detailed. There were just a few grammatical errors, such as the misuse of pronouns. It's minimal, and I think that this story would develop better.
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Way too slow start, and so much information that is un-needed or uninteresting . You have to slog through 5 chapters to start the story, and by then you're already sick of the story.
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why does the girl in the cover remind me of a hentai ive read
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Iris apparaît pour la première fois dans le NB001, mais ne rencontre Sacha que dans le NB002. Elle décide de le suivre parce qu'elle est redevable envers ce dernier pour l'avoir aidée à sauver Coupenotte de la Team Rocket. Elle a un rêve, mais n'a pas voulu le révéler à Sacha ou Rachid lorsqu'ils le lui ont demandé dans le NB006.On ne sait rien (ou presque rien) de sa famille au début de la saison. Elle n'en parle pas lors du NB009. Lors du NB002, elle se contente de dire comment elle s'appelle, mais n'explique pas d'où elle vient.