i read this story i like this too much its every chapter is very interstatily i think we read like these storires so that we learn about different kind of happen that occur in our life or other i recommend every one must read this story
At the moment of this review, I read until chapter 100. my opinion is very simple: a interesting story butchered by a horrible machine translation. just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.
Overall... The story is very food. I just have one very irritating problem...Alex is way too passive and a pushover. At first it comes off as very kind and humble, then it became pretty stupid, to annoying then very irritating. He has all that money and connections but can't even protect is girlfriend. He literally promised to her dying mother that he would do everything to protect her daughter. It would have been ok if all those tragedy only happens to him but no, debbie suffers the worst. Actually I was kinda relieved that Debbie escaped this sorry excuse of a man, then she would probably can live peacefully. I mean if he really loved Debbie he should have announced to the whole world the she is the future Mrs. Ambrose that way no one would dare to put their hand on her. I get that he would prefer not to be seduced by a bunch of gold diggers, and like to lay low, but if he truly loves Debbie he would endures those things for her... Just want to get my thoughts out of my head and find someone to rant.And for the Author...I know it is written like this for the sake of the further part of the story, but its just too much. Who would endure something like this if they have the ability to prevents those events from happening, especially seeing his significant other being tormented. At least put some little satisfying moments every now and then. And please just kill Cathy...
Me likey. the MC is smart and uses his ability instead of being disgusted by it and not using it which is so irritating. And besides that its fun to read and something fitting my taste. hopefully the author will update more
the story is entertaining and you can see the effort of the author, plus you can also see that he wants to promote his culture, but in my opinion, doing this practically shot himself in the foot, greatly reducing the audience, since there are many words that are practically the movement of his martial art and weapons, ranks, that the author puts them with names that as readers we are not used to, since practically when reading several novels, one forgets what that name and movement represented (did I understand myself here?) , and it's annoying. Also, the "MC" wasn't an MMA fighter? Because he practically only uses the martial art of his hometown? Can't he use others as well or try to combine them all like some manga characters do, becoming stronger like that? like garou from one punch man, some characters from kengan asura, and baki from baki.Also, the cultivation system of the mc and possibly the orc race is interesting, but I think it just unnecessarily complicates things when they can easily have a simpler cultivation system like most cultivation novels or Japanese magic novels, and As far as it goes, there is not much development of the mc's story, the creation of the world is good, but very, very slow.I will leave the novel here, it is good, but it bothers too much the names that the author of his culture uses, since one forgets their meanings, and I think that happens to most readers, and they end up abandoning it and only a few read it. read, or maybe it's just me, and that's why I think the author practically shot himself in the foot, although that part could be fixed with editing, using more general names that are understood by most, and in parentheses the author puts as he calls him originally, I think that with that he could have more readers, and the orc farming system, although interesting, is very complicated in my opinion, and could be simpler.martial arts were born out of the need of the weak to defend themselves from the strong, in itself the martial arts are to protect you.Thank you for your attention.
love the way this story is going and the plot and character development is great I'm definitely adding this book to my library, keep up the good work author❤️
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MC is just dumb and basically a pussy. If I would read a novel I would definitely read one with an MC with much better character traits than this one.
Am I the only one that laughed at the synopsis? I don't know why but I just found it funny that Gaia said no and then got destroyed because of it.
Pretty good, definitely recommend got a good story so far and like how the Mc knowns his end goal. And I know for a fact the thing that gonna be attractive about this is the Aventuresufffcufffcufffcufffcufffcufffcufffc
Does anyone know the raw name or where the novel can be read apart from webnovel.................................... ....................................
It starts out a little slow but it picks up pretty fast and it is pretty interesting to read once you start reading it but when you do you do not want to put it down.