Hi, and welcome to my novel :)I didn't intend to write a review before hitting chapter 1000, however I noticed many comments regarding a certain point. So, I got to edit the novel and write this review to notify you all about what changed :DThe age of the mc and other characters changed from being 8 into 11. I took into consideration all your comments and found them quite logical. I just ran a fast edit and check on all the +200 chapters of the novel, edited everything I could, and I plan to start a thorough edit later on this weekend.If you found anything that didn't add up, just write a comment and I'll edit that part ASAP.Thx for reading my novel, and thx for all the support and love you gave to it. I truly appreciate it.Have a nice reading and day everyone... See you later at 1k chapter review.P.S.: If you got any comment or opinion about my novel, just write it down. I take every single comment of yours seriously and may even change the setting of the entire novel based on your words :))
I haven't gone far with the book... but it's awesome?. The storyline, the characters especially the so-called "God". Very amazing book from an amazing writer ??
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really good novel !!
I am not one to be intrigued by game worlds or those stuff but the way you wrote this book was really simple and easy to understand .You have a vivid imagination of what you are writing and you display it very well.You also have the tendency to repeat words like in chapter 1, you kept in repeating MIND whereas you can interchange with the synonyms of mind.And this genre is not fantasy, it should sci-fi or another.
So, what truly stood out to me is your ability to describe your character's emotions. A few times, I actually felt what they were feeling and I could actually see the situation play before my eyes. Also, your description is outstanding and I like how you not only describe their surroundings, but also how your characters interact with it as the story progresses. The storyline is really interesting and I can't wait to know what happens next. Amazing!
Don't mind me, I'm just supporting my lonely book. Ganbatte author...........................................................................