The narration of the story is beautifully done. The description of each character was well written. The development of the story and the background formation is smooth. Overall a great start! Cheers! Happy writing!
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like the gamer comic, took a hour to find this but glad i did, really good writing and structure however it would be cool if it had more detail to the levelling system so it would intrigue the reader, well done!
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I had read this story long ago on a different website. based on the context of this story having words cut off at the end of chapters. plus stories having completely different contemt after chapter 42. i think this story was copied then brought in a completely different direction.https://creativenovels.com/novel/indomitable-oathbreaker/ This is where I read it previously.