MoullMahraz
the story and character development are amazing but what makes this story incredible for me is the detail you put into the beasts. the only problem I have is that thw chapters are a bit expensive.
I already wrote a review however as it seems author really wants it, I have decided to write a more detailed one.So far the story is nice and shows a lot of promise as well as some little bits of what is to come.The author is clearly still an ******* and as such I wish to cut him some slack.Try to keep it up and write longer chapters.
I liked the premise but after reading 25 chapters, the novel is more of a vrmmo wuxia novel with too few actual "constable" work. Thus far, it has developed like the stereotypical wuxia novel with all the damsels-in-distress type stuff and I kinda just got bored of it.
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I’m a sucker for a good kingdom building novel, this one’s really good and the settings original as well. I hope to be able to see what happens next~ ??????????????
