Good work, good writing, pacing, everything was done just right. Keep it up. ???
I really liked the novel and enjoyed the first 8 chapters. And bringing modern day technology in the medieval fantasy world and getting people reaction… it is awesome. Can’t wait for more technology inventions from MC and people reaction after they see those technology.
I like the first few chapters, first chapter gave the vibe on how the battles will be, and the Crab thingy was 'out of the box'.Definitely will continue reading the next chapters!
It is an interesting, funny novel, and it is different from other styles of novels., but the chapters are so short, so for this reason I will go back until it updates more than 100 chapters
I promise you this novel is worth your time. Please read and leave a comment. Thank you.
Loved it, there were a few typos but nothing that really broke the story or its emotions that it invokes.Lots of moments where i was genuinely immersed in the story. Good characters, good story, the world itself could be more fleshed out but other than that it is amazing.Would have left a review sooner but WebNovel kept glitching out and wouldn't let me submit one. However that won't stop me. :)
OMG ? another book from my FAVORITE AUTHOR ?❤️❤️❤️???????? I'm ? sure it's going to be great I'm so excited ??
I officially just became a fan. I really like how I'm able to feel the emotions of the characters. Beautiful writing I hope to able to write like this someday.
This is the second book of a good story
A really great read! I was really immersed with its world and how the characters feel they're real and alive—even though they're uh quite the opposite within the context of the story lol—after-alive rather lmao. The updates slowing down though is unfortunate, hopefully the author's doing well and taking the time to take care of themselves. Hoping as well they won't give up on this, because really, it's a great read. Keep up the good work!
a really amazing book. it has great pacing and the characters are amazing. I can't get enough of it, especially how the kid will grow. 10/10
Just a heads up but there is a fanfiction with more chapters, same storyline and everything