SharonsFlame
It's preety good.. I like the character Milo here... But also want more deep story about Victor too, author. I love that it's the series regular updates.. Hahaha still I have to wait every day. Can you please update sooner.. The time not fixed though.. It's updates on different time.. So fix a time..
Just wanna review something so there it is
Here for the challenge so take five stars
For what it is, it gets the job done. No bullshit just straight into the action without pointless build up
It's a fairly spicy book that I would recommend
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Let's start with the writing quality. It definitely has room for improvement but it's understandable. As for the story development, I'm not sure yet. The character design, however, is great. Overall, it's a good read! I recommend this novel
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Kindly give your feedback for improvement in further chapters. Do let me know if you like short crisp chapters or a bit long detailed chapters. ..
No comments? Let me help out, it was really a pleasant surprise and I quite enjoyed the novel. Just about a guy being successful in life,wish I had that mindset when I was schooling, would have made it by now so it’s like a wish fulfilment novel for me. Translations can be a bit hard, but I understood most of it so yeah ?
So far so good. An electrifying blend of suspense, action, and intrigue. You won't want to put this one down as the plot unravels with unexpected surprises.
haven't read it and possibly won't read it cause I'm not gonna spend money on a fic here author no hate but you really made a novice mistake of signing a contract do you truly believed anyone gonna pay you after 50 chapter free ones sad to see this novel gonna be a unknown one forever
