I totally love your use of words, your metaphorical expressions and how real and authentic you are, you’re doing a good work here, I just hope you would indent the paragraphs properly , it makes reading easier. Either ways , I going to see the end of this book. You can also check out mine; A Millionaire Up North, and leave a review , I’ll do much appreciate that.
love it..the adventure cheng dalei make me buy the coin you know..so that me the story is good??
Generally an amazing read! Love the world background description!
Another story
Never! Never! Never!
"Let's watch human shows, but not in the magic box, we go to the location directly desu."
Human
Okay the last story is "Unseen World"
laziness, prestige, lacking
The door shot open with a loud slam. Hoseok and I flipped our heads towards the visitor covered in rain, panting hard .
Meanwhile i swiftly made my way toward the tower in order to play my part as a team player... bout to be up. I nodded as i waved and parted with my current team into the tower. I sighed as the proceedings seem to be so slow i almost dosed of before making our way to the preliminary arena.
Only a little red haired girl is unfazed by the cruel aura that pins everyone else to their place. While others can't even twitch, she walks up to the magical monster like knowing that it would never hurt her.