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This is the worst type of wish fulfillment in that it assumes you are dumb.The MC gets a treasure finding app. When he finds treasure, he gets rewarded with a property - so the app can affect the banking and municipal property management? And the next thing the app finds is . . . a chance to rescue a famous singer. which is not a treasure.I enjoy wish fulfillment as much as the next person, but this is just mindless stupidity. It's too boring.
Honestly, if u can read past the stupidity of the mc, it would be a decent read. The first hurdle in the reading comes unassuming. He is supposed to be a reincarnation of a 30 y/o, not a kindergartner. He seems to make the logical action then does something beyond stupid to force the plot armor card to appear. Then he repeats. The mc seems to have 2 personalities, the one that is logical and then there is the one that embodies arrogance, with nothing to back it up, and stupidity, with no reasoning behind why. The logical one is the one barrating while the other one is the one acting and doing the stupid to force the plot along. Then there are assumptions made everywhere that have no evidence, like them being dragon royalty or something. All of it comes as if the narrator is unreliable without the author meaning to. It would have been better if the author didn’t make the mc a reincarnator. It would have been a better read and would not have all of these problems.
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the first chapter opening with a war scene.. it's a nice start actually.. I have read all the chapters highly recommended Good luck author,
Who the hell is Keiji!?... Isn't the mc name Vlad and Scott?... I don't mind about those naming sense(Klyzer and the other)..... Well the plot is good at least(Even thought he was supposed to be old monster but those cliche... whatever).. also the heroine development was too hastened... Overall it's good... just good no more or less... In my personal opinion
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guys this is a hot potato, once the mc tries to get spiritual energy back on earth with the help of the chinese government, well lets just say that people will be distinguished by their ethnicity and where they live.
this is my honest opinion about this novel: i have expected more from it especially how it started, like how the mc was a loner and how mature he was for his age (the author proclaim him to be)and all those things. it all start to go down for me when kat died and instead of him getting more mature is almost like he's getting more childlike. he was given a mission from his grandfather to seek out his parrents and to get stronger, and honestly form me he hasn't been focusing on those things. its more getting girlfriends and when they leave him or when he needs to leave then all he feels is lonely and being worry almost all the goddam time. he's been traing for one and a half year and yet other just easily get to his level and by other I mean the girls.so many ups and down that instead of making the story greater its just making it worst. one of the thing i hate the most is how long it takes for the mc to increase his strength. he also loses a hole year unconscious in some kind of spirit world and the benefits he got from that is not worth mentioning. last but not least his life and death is in hands of some blue hair girl till now I don't even know who the **** she is.if you guys stil want to read it give it a try I'm even suprise at my self that i have read it till chapter 223 but to me its not that great. i will keep reading it just to see how it will end.