TheEyePatch
love the story. the fl gives some spy serious Vibe. the mystery is amazing and the thriller is too. the author did a amazing character sketch of before and after fl's father's death.
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The writing is very exquisite and the author backs that up with great vocabulary used. They help build the emotions between the characters which portrays the different situations and struggles they go through.
Would loved a longer story.................................................................................................................................
A long time ago... there is a novel with only 2 locked chapter. Everytime its update a new chapter, its stay the same. Now, the locked chapter suddenly invade... without news, like a shadow.
Arthur, why are you so stingyNot even one free page
A solid start to a semi-serious cultivation story. I think there's a lot here to like. My problem with these types of lighthearted cultivation stories is all to often they fall into the tropes that they are satirizing, and they often end up with an incoherent plot. And while this one is so far doing okay on the plot front its definitely treading some familiar ground. All in all the novel ends up perhaps a little less outright "funny" than the best in the genre, but if you actually enjoy cultivation novels, and don't mind a bit of humor on top this one has a lot of potential.
This is a novel worth reading, and I personally am the kind who don't like romance but this novel.It puts romance nicely and in a limit, and the limit and pace is so good that you never even think their was romance even once in the novel yet their is.I had literally read the whole novel in about 10 hours.This is probably the second or third book that I had had an interest in do much....Go read it...
I really enjoyed the first 39 chapters, I hope it gets picked up.jfoejdjdioenedidkwooddjkdpddikdk2o3irjcd9jdiri3meforneooefjidkirjdjd
To each his own is a term, I would use for this story as its not bad, just that its not for me. Its early yet and we have an okay ML with a loyal sidekick and a rapid evolution process that happened in less than 5 days. I think thats what my issue is,I just cannot connect with the ML or any of the characters per se. I'll continue to read the story to see if I ca be influenced. But if anything, I doubt this story will stay in my library for long.
Nice nice i really love the book and waiting for more updatesXOXOXOXOXXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXOXOXOXOXKXOXKXKXOXOXOXOXXOXOXXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXO??????????????
