So good, I love how greatly detailed the world building is. Furthermore, the portrayal of multiple character perspectives throughout the storyline is so fun to read. It’s unique and I have not read many webnovels that do this and show different characters’ side of the story and not just the main character’s.
epic novel. I now need to hit the character limit so I am going to put some very unspecified and uninspired text within this review alright
nice story, hope for more. thank you.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
From the very beginning, the story is intriguing, the characters are expressive. You don't struggle with grammar, style, or tenses, so it's nice to read it. Well done!Good luck with the contest!
This book has a lot of potential, i love the characters, the plot is great, yes it has a few mistakes but that does not matter because it is a great story and i recommend your book. Kudos to the author and keep up the good wrk.
I hope this story give more motivation to read more novels in this series and more importantly that I can make it possible for me to use this
while I really enjoy rushed storys this is on another lvl. it's to the point that it starts to be kind of random also....wth are ****** THESEE FOR you put them every 10 sec in the text
first time seeing a cricket novel here ,its pretty good so far. definitely give it a try if you are a cricket fan though you might find it a bit dramatic.
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This is my first original novel, I will be improving the content of the chapters as I write the novel. The more active you are, the more chapters I will publish. I hope you enjoy it!
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Very enjoyable to read. I don't understand why people trash talked it. It's a clean 'almost' harem without the gushing romance or excess pervertedness. It's comedic with purpose & (prompted) direction.I hope that it will eventually be picked back up to continue translating. I would happily drop coins on this story.