WARNING NOT FINISHEDI really enjoyed this story despite all the gender mix ups after ch40. my main issue is the story just stops, there is no ending just a massive cliff hanger in the middle of an arc. I hope others cam save their money because I was very disappointed. the development and concept were great and I was looking forward to see how it all was suppose to finish.
Sorry, but the reason for his banishment alone doesn't make sense since no king would marry off the crown prince as a hostage. That would be the downfall for the kingdom after him.
just straight up trash would explain why but some has already did
can barley understand the first chapter what even is with the random letters that honestly make no sense??? the story and characters seem good but it is hard to tell because of the slightly poor writing quality. other than that as far as I can tell it is pretty good. keep writing and maybe do some very slight revisions and it would be a great work.
Think of this review as a thread of Q&A as I sorted the possible common questions that people might have regarding this work. If you find that none of the questions matches with the one that you have, you're free to add them in the comments!Q: Where did it take place?A: It takes place in an alternate future of dystopian civilization where earth was governed by a single enigmatic group, along with 50 megacorporations that owned their own portion of Districts. Magic has become science, and technologies became tangible resources for both the rich and the poor. Cultures are cultivated, and a country-sized District was terraformed by the will of large organizations to ensure the human ecosystem—of both preys, and predators.Q: What is this story all about?A: It is about a bizarre and cynical healing-journey of a man that wants to uncover the truth of the unforgivingworld. While also simultaneously being a recovery journey, making a name for himself, for the sake of obtaining that long lost light of achievement. Slowly and surely, building a notorious chain of Syndicate and gathering various technologies, patents, and rose through the Level Threat of the City!Q: Who is the Protagonist? And what type of guy is he?A: Faust Hecates, is the name!He is a man with many scars of the past, hiding it all behind a simple ever smiling face. Unmotivated and self loathing, he avoided all things that positively benefited him, coping with laughter and lying to himself. So if he stated that he didn't know something. Chances are, he is lying :) Though, like all stories, things will change soon, as he needs to commence a vendetta against the grand scheme of the world, and make the best of it!Q: Is he overpowered?A: Yes and no, in many factors! but he won't be the only thing or person that's overpowered. The bizarreness of the casts and their capability will be a great hurdle for our protagonist. Likewise, all the lost and the win will be used as an improvement, and an achievement that is earned through pure efforts.Q: Is there any romance?A: This story is plot and action focused. There will be slow building of romance within the plot, but that won't be the prime focus of the story.Q: I see hàrem tag, is this hárem!?A: Yes, it is. But again, not the main focus, and the amount of romance partners will be kept as realistically to the plot as possible. Likewise, all of them have a significant plot to the stories, and the strength of the organization that Faust will be developing.Q: Why do you, as the author, rate it with the five stars? Are you full of yourself?A: Just like how light can be considered as a wave or particle depending on how it's observed, the experience will be different from person to person. As someone who wrote this story. I have fun, and I hope that you who will read it in the future, will have the same or even more enjoyment than I do :)
If I have to be sincere, I read this novel till the end thanks to the characters around the MC... his friends, his teacher/master, his lover. As for the MC and the plot development? I felt disappointed and betrayed many times. The novel is well written with even the 'power-level' being well balanced. Sadly, I read and closed the novel for nothing more but curiosity and hope that the author won't mess or kill with the characters I so much loved in the story.The novel itself starts very slow-paced, but that is rather refreshing. The author knows well how to write the everyday events, training routine, common and funny days, etc.The first marking event of the novel that makes the MC completely abandon his 'home' in midst of the loss of his loved ones is what annoyed me from the start. How I can say... gave me that, "Oh~how convenient" vibe? That was the first forced part that I felt, and sadly many more appeared.The MC is TOO slow in maturing. We reach a point of the novel where he despite being aware of the dangers and 'loving' his friend and family, time and time again bought them to danger that could be avoided by chasing in the future when he was stronger (after all, the MC is aware of his own genius).Strangely, while he always ignores this act of neglecting his loved ones, he always breaks with random people or those that wanted to harm, r*ape or kill his family and friends. Of course, the character regretting or hesitating to kill a person is normal, but... the author messed so much with the forced events that he felt 'necessary', that the MC becomes something hateful, at the very least, for me.Concluding, is an amazing and complete story, but with adevelopment and ending that made me hate the novel even while living the characters.
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This story revolves around an 'NPC' that holds a hidden identity of being a reincarnator from earth. He is summoned into a territory and slowly increases his strength by farming and chopping trees. The MC is not overly empathetic nor is he cruel, he's just one of those protagonists that have an OP near impossibly durable personality. The story has a relatively slow pace as it describes almost every aspect of the Mc's life from taking a dump to eating a pear. Don't read this story if your counting on character depth though as the only character with any real depth is the MC. Even most of the beasts in this story have a more "real" personality than the other NPCs.
????????This book is simply amazing!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read more!!!!!!!!! ❤️??????❤️?????? Please update this story soon!