Everything is just fine! Thank you so much author! I hope you can upload everyday so that I can read new things as well! Again, thank you so much!
first of all there are too many problems in this novel I'm gonna elaborate on these one by one:1. this novel will make more sense in mc is not a reincarnated person but a normal person with a system. for example he doesn't use his future knowledge at all, all the calculations are done by the system to find the best company to invest in and mc just invest in and same will all the advance formula the system sell mc just buy from it. so i don't know why mc have to be an reincarnated person.2.in starting chapter it becomes a slow burn slice of life story (quite a few chapters dedicated to mc solving maths and physics formula that are just there as fillers) but when it comes to recruiting employees for his "Empire(which doesn't even establish yet)" he goes to the person in his hoodie and asks him to work for him, and as to why cause he will build a "empire(again)" which will matter in this world and the person agreed like seriously.3. The most important point- he was a 35 year old middle age working man that regressed to 2008 which makes him a 18 year old now you will think he is a 18 year old with the mental age of 35 years old but no, his mental age is of 18 year old, he doesn't have the emotional maturity of a 35 years old men.4. many people have noticed this and already commented: "beta simp mc" Yes mc is a simp let me explain- i) a 35 year mentally old man going after a 18 year old girl who he knows that she is a selfish girl who is only with him so that he could help her in study and assignment. and after knowing all this he still hopes that she will not abandon him, like seriously dude why don't you go and just beg her then she might just stay. I don't see any emotional maturity that comes with age and taking responsibility, that's why i suggested that this novel will do much better if mc is not a reincarnated person.p.s: To the author, i am sorry for my harsh words and criticism and i understand that you are a new author and still learning and you will surely become a great author. it's your novel and i have no right to criticize it but it's just my views on your novel which i think may help you in understanding the others prospective so that you can better refine your work. I'm also from india and it's rare to see an Indian writer and i just wanted to support you. my words may sound harsh, but my intention is just to help you. I hope you will not take it the wrong way. wishing you all the best for your future endeavours.
OMG poor ember has really suffered enough!
Yep this is my first attempt at writing. It will probably be OKAY, you should read if you want to I suppose. We got a main character who is electric ! And a female lead who is involved somehow. What more could you want in a novel. Upload schedule is pretty bad but this is just a passion project so we will see if I’m more consistent later on.
Damn,,,,bro...I mean this stuff is good you know.Like for real, you don't sugarcoat the darkness,,,,the negativitywhile there are great details ,,,, and real feel to the characters themselves....
I love this story, I have to put an amount of characters so please ignore this...,....................,...............,..............,.....
This novel tries, and fails to be "sophisticated". The author attempts to copy Western novels but doesn't understand that readers can just go read that elsewhere. There is no attempt at even mixing Eastern and Western styles of writing (e.g. Lord of the Mysteries), just straight up Western. If I enjoyed reading purely Western style novels so much, I wouldn't be on this platform seeking something different.
Hello I was just reading Slice Of Life In Fantasy World and I’m just wondering if you have dropped the novel and I also ask questions there just now and I will also read this novel too so I’m hoping it is as good as the novel I just asked about
Immersive world with charming characters, will continue to read!
The world-building in the story is so good, and the characters, especially the MC with his silly pranks on his parents, are amazing! ? I’m excited to read more and curious to see what will happen next. this time i think i commented on correct story ?. i should have done this the movement i completed reading, anyway i just love the story, especially MC Jung.
This is my first book on Webnovel. Your sincere read, reviews, and comments are all I need to dish out more valuable content.Enjoy the ride of, 'Marry Me, Miss.' ?
I have read many novel of similar type like this ,but this story seem a bit more interesting than the others one.I hope that this story will not be dropped.