CulturedVoid
skipped ahead to ch880 after reading first 30 chapters. MC is still a child after 800 chapters. author is a pedo, no point reading ?
no world building, no proper translation, no character development, the whole story is just for the mc plot Armor, even more messed up thing is all these 1100 chapters happened in just 30 novel days and mc even became god in less than 30 days
I couldn't even get through chapter 2 because of how awful this translation is. Webnovel is notorious for its horrible translations but usually they are handled ok the first 40 chapters. This one, clearly no editing has been done. It's horrible to read, don't bother or you're brain will turn to mush.
interesting synopsis.......................
This one looks interesting.... Especially I feel system is way to awesome....i hope they pick this one not some other trash like they always do
i did not even read the first chap yet but the idea of the system seems interesting but really 100 million words pitiful i look at you with disdain i can only say one thing:pathetic!!!!!!!!!
Pretty good novel from the 7 chapters we have. The writing quality is alright, nothing too blaring to where it's hard to read, although the author has the habit of writing everything in one paragraph, making conversation a little hard to follow. I find the MC enjoyable, if a bit vulgar at times with their words although I find it a bit funny personally. The MC has a unique power, with him having the knowledge of the Niko Style from Kengan Omega, one of my personal favorite mangas, which is nice considering all the boring op wishes often present in fanfics.
1. Writing is fast paced, the narration is stale and boring as well. the quality of the writing is a bit worse than many trial reads.2. Story development how should I say it? just decent.3. Won't say anything about updating stability. for now I will give five stars.4. World background is decent as well just not good enough for me, it is stale.
Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.
Just from the synopsis im sure i can give this five stars.My favorite genre aswell as a system is just perfection…. . . . . , . . . . . . . . .
Synopsis was excellent clearly explains enough to catch readers interest.Chapter 1 which I dropped at ruins entirety of itSentence structure is almost non existentI find it hard to believe that their is a family like that, horrible siblings and parents sure but to not even notice son isn't living with them Is difficult to believe. Another thing difficult to believe is them being so oblivious that they don't notice mc success in things
The novel is relatively well written with no obvious glaring errors. The plot however contains way too much drama hurt and heartache for my liking. There is also very little to bordering on no romance whatsoever and with a standard beaten down protagonist who thinks he is worthless it's kinda depressing overall.
