i have read 124 chapters so far and loving it. book is good and i am loving the dynamics with a child. yunyue is so cute.the only feedback is that i think considering the content, this one is too expensive
the development is too fast and the writing grammer is really bad for someone that has english for their second language and the protagonistacts like a kid when hes supposed too be 30 years old and the reoson why the slime doesnt talk its dumb
good story, eager to see the upcoming chapters
Awesome Chinese novel this is so cool,and awesome
New original perspective on the rebirth genre that is fun to read. The descriptions in the combat scenes were quite thrilling while the characters communication could usesome refinement. A solid read for people looking for thrill with a new take on a familiar theme.
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I have read about 260 chapters now in 1,5 weeks, I feel like the Story is ruined at the point when almond leaves the first layer early, it was no smooth transition and i am absolutely dissapointed, I had high hopes to have found a gem here, but I didnt. I like the wriring a lot and the quality of your chapters is top, so is your Charakter Design and the Logic which you introduced into your World, but as mentioned in my point of view you Ruined your own pace and for me the pace of the Story which is why I must give a low value to your book.I hope in your next book you will not Do the Same mistake again and I am looking forward to your future works.
Fantastic work the Author . The world building is great and characters has consistent I genuinely enjoy the story .Keep up the good work.
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Overall a disappointing read. Standard transmigration novel where the MC arrives in a world based on a Eroge game and of course he is the villain.The story itself was just to long in development, starting at him arriving at 5 years of age, but it dragged on through school years etc. after chapter 41 I threw it in. Initially the MCs (villain) goal was to save the heroines and sub-heroines from bad endings if not selected by the protagonist, think it was 4-5 Heroines and 3 sub-heroines, when out of the blue comes another transmigrator who also knows of this game and they team up splitting the girls between them. Mind you, both transmigrators are still young, oh and the second transmigrator is a girl (but maybe past life a guy, no idea). So 2 young kids are plotting, even discussing murder and later the MC actually incinerated a number of homeless bums. Yeh he prevented a future event happening but in my thoughts if he knew what was to happen then im pretty sure there were other ways to get around this episode. Still it happened and it really was kinda offputting.Anyways, the story was, in my mind, nothing exciting and read almost like a child’s story. I forget that a lot of Japanese novels tend to be rather formal and stiff in their delivery, which didn’t do this any favours. It was simply to childish and failed to deliver something that can capture a readers attention.Tl;dr - Try elsewhere for something more engrossing.
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