Jetboy76drh
Although I love the concept ,the characterisation and world building is atrocious . Most characters aren't even 2 dimensional, dialogues are horrendous and shows how naive and childish the MC and/or author is. It is astonishing to see the writing quality is the best part of the story.
Yes i knek the Authors shamless self rate but guess what i dont care i just really hope everyone likes my novel and dont forget to tell your famiky and friends ha jk but seriously I hope you all enjoy the novel it means a lot to me.
It's a really forced novel and the MC is sometimes really stupid. The author keeps saying how the MC doesn't want trouble yet he does absolutely nothing when the 3 women all go out of their way to cause trouble for him in the most forced way ever, he doesn't even try sometimes and just lets it happen. This is also probably a harem, which completely ruins the novel.It has some unique(as in CN unique) but that's it.
Honestly, it got more marks because of the translators.I am around chapter 300 or so?MC is your template Chinese MC. If I need to explain it to you, than please proceed to read this novel. You will find it entertaining. To those who know about it, Yes it's the same stuff repackaged and rebranded. MC is a Celestial Lord but doesn't acts like one. I don't even know how should he act. Anyone hurting his family is killed, his dialogues are a bit above chunibyou's and... honestly I don't know. Despite reading 300 chapters all I can say is his personality it template CN Xianxia material. It's the sam world, except China has to do something with everything. It was responsible for cutting off cultivation, it has the greatest heritage, it has the strongest masters....you get the hint.Until now I have seen only few bits of racism. If that offends you, why are you even reading a modern/urban CN novels. Oh, but you will see a great dose of nationalism. Racism includes hating Koreans and Japanese. Name calling them. And not sure why, but a strict belief that the whole world is plotting against China.Not much is explained about the world. But some hints here and there suggest a larger world than just earth. So in the end :1: It's the same stuff.2: Probably among the better written ones.3: Story is okay.4: It's actually slightly entertaining. Ciao.Keep safe.
Such BS this didn't get picked! Why do female novels can have 6 selections but male version only gets 4??????? The injustice!
I have read many fantasy books but this book is entirely different and the storyline is interesting and it intrigued me to read further...The author's writing style is remarkable...The characters are incredible...Kudos work, Author!
Its good so far but im still waiting for some g re ammical errors to be fixed
