The beginning was heart ripping, the love of a mother was show perfectly, it made me kind of emotional. I found myself immersed in the vivid characters and environments that played out like a perfect scenery in my mind, capturing both the inhuman aspect of Malaki's wolfish nature and the depths of his emotional journey. I have great respect for the authors attention to detail and would 100% recommend anyone who craves depth and realism in their fantasy adventures.
So far I like it pretty much :) I hope this continues well
wrong names, incomprehensible sentences, terrible grammar, despite the story seemingly interesting but its too hard to keep reading
Excellent story worth a shot.Complete english sentences with paragraphes, good writing style and rare typos. For an ukrainian who might not even be a native english speaker, it’s quite an achievment. The first chapters have more descriptions and inner monologues because it’s a dungeon story, but it soon switch to a better balance with actions and dialogues.Good world building, and great attention from the author to build a consistant magic system bringing enougth originality to stand out compared to generic magic fantasy stories. It’s called ”The origin of dungeons” and explores how such a world came to be.It’s therefor a bit weird how there are some inconsistancies or even contradictions between the actions and the established personality of the MC. It tickles me a bit, but you guys will probably overlook it just fine. I do warn the author that a too apathic MC that turns into just a camera for the readers makes for a boring story tho. An MC needs motivations, drive and agency, else the author will have to cheat too much and pile up the plot armor and coincidencies to push the story forward, turning the MC into a raft without sail pushed and dragged around by the tempest.Overall a great start and i recommend you give it a try.
A captivating story that draws the readers in with every exhilarating act, beautifully described scene of people or landscape and unrelenting emotions that makes the readers feel what the characters are feeling. Quite unique and a strongly recommended read. Well done author.
I've read up to 100, and so far I've been enjoying it. This story feels like a slow burn, moving the story forward wise. Maybe too convenient getting super rare demon summon, but I'm okay with that. Dunno if giving him crazy super dungeon to fight so early is the way to go, but we'll see how it progresses.
It's a really great start. I really want to know how it continues ?
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This is truly a Hidden gem! I started read it since it first released and cannot stop until now.BUT, I just reliased that this gold, ranked 99++. Please translator. Put a note that say you need vote at every chapter. Please! I don't want you to drop this story. I will vote for you from now on!
Very interesting concept and writing style. The author uses a red dragon as a love interest and it is a unique take on romance which is worth a read. Keep writing, and keep posting!
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Its like another story of upgrade specialist in another world with a worst plot and writing style. it looks it got its idea in that novel so this novel is no no for me.