chickenugget
A really good book, thought there are some typos , but definitely one of my top 10 . Please don't drop it author.
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A refreshing read for a while...Writing Quality. The flow of each scenes were neatly describes. Also, just to give a piece of advice. The other authors used to tell me this as well xd. I have seen parts of the story that has longer paragraphs, I suggest you to cut it more into minimal paragraphs since it might look too long and ardous to read for some of your readers especially those reading in mobiles.Story Development. The story flowed smoothly and it show great potential with its unique plot.Character Design. The Ml were portrayed as a pushover on the first parts of the novel but as you went on to read, you could see his hidden charms as well. The other characters also supports well the flow of the story.Updating Stability: Hmm...just take your time to hone your chapters.Quality > Quantity.World Background. Well-detailed.Overall, this book shows a lot of potential already. Keep up the good work, author.
reviewing for the event fp keep up the good work
Great book, we need more chapters. Wasn't expecting this good quality from just a short story. Nice and interesting plot and the imagery used in the story is unreal. Great work.
Very interested premise and promising. Curious when the villain tag will come into play though, I am excited for him to break and bring carnage
great beginning. excited to see where it goes.
This is good stuff.As expected of an "Extrovert". The synopsis alone had already pinned my eyes. The development is just finely paced and the colours of genres are just rightly blended. A must read for LN lovers
it's effective if you want to lower your IQ
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Now this is a good story. from the onset i sense pure and brilliant potential . Even in one chapter , I'm hooked and can't wait to read more about Noah.
"Oh boy, I'm not the one who will--"
