The story is pretty good. I'll read it if you continue. You have to change the main character a little bit, for example, if you don't have legs, make yourself a stick or something like Ivar in Vikings.
High quality writer very few mistakes for a story. Good plot wit many twists and turns although kind of bumpy when it should have a more float kind of way. Can’t wait for next chapter and stories too short
I enjoyed it ? this is "a must read" story. The author did not fail me, as a reader, to engaged in the story. To think this is the author's first story, it's far way better than what i had expected. Good job?
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The MC is a regressor with a system that lets him be OP in football.However, I guess he was becoming a little bit too OP in the authors opinion because after more than 600 chapters, another character randomly heard a voice in his head saying [ would you like to change your fate?] Of course, that was a system, and of course, he accepted the offer.I don't like novels where the protagonist isn't the only one with a cheat, so...✌️
The first chapter is interesting and it is arising curiosity to read more so publish the next chapter at the earliest. Wish you good luck and keep improving.
I'm not good at writing these reviews, but having read/reading SGS, I know that this story will be just as great! Can't wait until we get further along down the storyline and learn about this aliens background and its capabilities!
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ok here is an honest review and i personally think that your story is great for your first time and i find your MC really interesting . Keep it up n good luck
Never gonna ever recommend this trash to anyone, this guy posts chapter as thin as flimsy as paper (I mean very short chapters) and still takes a lot of time to upload.
Keep this going... The fight scene was great and I love the depth of this world. Loving it all! Keeps me on the edge!! Wish it had 30 more chapters :)