Got dam that synopsis is something else. It literally looks like a 10 year old kid wrote it. And he probably had a huge grin on his face after like he actually wrote something cool.
Great read sometimes makes you want to pull out your hAir And think how it should turn out just wish the Do 2 chapTers per day i would pay the same just be easyer and release ir ealyer 10pm is beD time and i try to say up to read but when i do it has my head racing and cant sleep
It’s average, generic, face-slapping, OP, cultivator alchemy mc...If you like this book’s author other books, then u will like this one.But if you only like gold-tier novels, then I wouldn’t recommend this to you.
I have read the initial chapters and I like how the story is setup with a non-mainstream theme of 'Mafia'. The established world of the novel has lot of potential for exciting development. Also the main protagonist is neither OP nor to lack in power, with a good contrasting personality trait which give a plus point to this novel. If the author focuses on main story without much overloading the chapter with unimportant stuff, the novel will become much more exciting. It will definitely grew into top rank novel.
meh, Grammer could use help. The titles even have issues. Jumps around, tried to make good jokes but doesn't translate at all and things sometimes are kinda forgot or not followed up on. like a monster is killed for level up but he does level up or he is suddenly level 10 after alot of travel filler.
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I already read all the available chapters and I hope that the author if possible writes about the MC scene with each of the harem girls in order to better visualize them according to their personalities. Please
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An isekai novel! This genre is my favourite. Its quite interesting how the Mc can only use guns in a fantasy world. Well this is the first time I've read a novel in first person POV. The writing quality is decent and the Author has described the thoughts of Mc very effectively. I like how the world building is done thus far.
Overall a 4.8 star review for this new novel. As this is not like those typical fantasy magic novels, I recommend that readers be patient and give it a try.
are there any new chapters or is the book finished
Un mc retrasado, que ha dejado de seguir creciendo mentalmente.El tipo que lo usa como lanza es mejor mc, mas calculador y frío y sin un risa retrasada, el gusano mc no tiene casi planes a largo plazo, solo se guía por impulsos.Lo que puede ser peor que un mc retrasado sea neutral bueno o malo, es un mc retrasado pero con un sistema que debería hacerlo mas inteligente y darle mas opciones, ademas de una potencia de calcula tremenda.Un estereotipo de mc mitad rimuru y leylin de la novela de magos, por el lado de rimuru por sus risas estúpidas y casi uso nulo y investigación del sistema en profundidad y por parte de leylin por dejarle casi todo al sistema, no poder dejar cosas atrás emociones etc, aparte de la poca creatividad al uso del sistema.===Resumen mc estupid mitad rimuru y mitad leiylin
As an author myself I just wanna say this book is amazing, it keeps you hooked from beginning to end with the uniqueness of a guy who simply loves fire! Not to mention the way his character grows more mature and betters himself as he experiences life. The ending was kind of rushed I saw WAYY more potential for what could’ve been. But when you’v been writing a book this long its only natural the ending gets slightly rushed.And I love how the marked that the story would continue on with his children and Milkyona had even reincarnated to look over the new crimson dragon. ?Keep it up man!