the story is so fantastic and I like it so far
This story excites me. I can't wait for the next chapters. This fantasy novel is more unique than the ones I usually see here. Werewolves, vampires, reincarnated as blah blah blah and my sytem blah blah blah. Hehe. Keep it up ❤️
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I absolutely love the story 10 out of 10, I would highly recommend it. However, there's one thing I don't like, and that's Celestria. I find her weird, childish, and somewhat manipulative (manipulating the MC or acting pitiful in some degree.)At first, I thought the MC would distance himself from her because of what she did to her original childhood friend. I find it disgusting that she abandoned someone she had known for a long time for someone she just met and thought she loved. Then, when the MC arrived and proved himself, she started chasing him, which felt like a typical, overused trope in Chinese romance stories, common and boring in my opinion.Spoiler alert! Celestria even begged the MC to have a baby despite them being underage, which is a serious issue. On top of that, she lied to her family about being in a relationship with the MC when they weren't. That is very delulu of her and unhealthy to me.If the author decides to include Celestria in the harem (which I suspect the author will), I would strongly prefer Sarah as the main wife. She was there first, even before the MC transmigrated into this world, which makes it justifiable that she should hold that position. Sarah sacrificed so much just to be with the MC again, unlike Celestria.(This is just my opinion as a reader of this story. No hate especially to the author. I'm just expressing what I feel to the characters because I really like the story, and I hope that it could help the author in some degree.)
I really like this novel something new,I only sorry for you because you can’t get gift ,I want to give but I don’t have the options so For now I can give only stone don’t drop it ?❤️
i love thus book. I'm so hooked. keep up the good work author
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They interrogated us, examined us as they want. Who the hell think they are?
I felt a sudden shift in my white pants. A new voice popped into my head, and I was unsure of what to make of it. The name Jimmy just popped up in my head, so that's what I'd call it. There was a toughening in my pants, the blood in my body flowing endlessly. My arms moved around Sagi's waist holding on tightly. I didn't want to let go. The taste of strawberries flooded my mouth abruptly, Sagi's lips began to cup over my top suctioning them kindly. I thought we were just doing a peck!? Jimmy's voice was no longer distorted, it grew louder and louder until it was the only thing my mind could handle especially with this rush through my body that only grew more and more by the second.
(Lucia being remarkably inaccurate tried to play it cool since she chose for this to happen. Jason stepped ahead to slap Lucia while Eric rushed to stop his hand from slapping her. The Rebels were uncertain about how Eric could let his guard down for a girl like Lucia.)
The room was silent, no one exactly sure where to begin. Finally, Derik decided on a starting point and broke the silence.