I'm on chapter 37 so far, but I'm still hook to the story. NICE :)
This is a very interesting concept. I was skeptical at first, I can't lie but decent read.
It was good but it had some traces of Gloomba in it so I didn't like it that much. I showed it to my girlfriend and she laughed at all the parts Gloomba wrote
You know who else can cast only fireballs? Exactly, Fire wizard from Clash of Clan. anyway, I like the premise. Hope to see the story goes on.
Author Here.Thank you for reading this, i really appreciate that?Let me know if you have some suggestion or criticism. i'll try to be better and better i hope you all enjoy the story
I read this feeling anxious and excited. Anxious because the chapters are too few, excited because the book is simply so good.I hope Lauren's family show extreme fear and remorse towards Lauren before they die, if they must. But the father... I feel bad for him, especially after he's starting to show Lauren some semblance of care, and I don't know why. (Maybe because I have soft spot for parents.)I know it's not easy, but please, update more, author!
weird dialogue and surprise world background without explanation. the main charecter is stupid and naive.
This review section is like my wallet rn.Just here to say my piece, I'll be back and change my review after reading this book.
Hi! It’s the author here, and I have a few things to share.First of all, thank you so much for reading my novel! This is my first time writing something like this, so I’m truly grateful for your support.Second, about the future: I’m still in school, which means I can’t publish every day. However, I’ll do my best to release at least one or two chapters per week.Third, I’m not a native English speaker, so there might be some errors here and there. I always try my best to catch and correct them, though!Lastly, another big thank you! And yes, for anyone wondering, I do feel a bit embarrassed about giving my novel a 5-star rating… but it’s not my fault if I think it’s cool, right?Let’s try to make this novel popular!
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Angel
"Do you know what he did to you?"