The novel being inspired by WoW’s druid class is a massive boon for me, as that has always been my favorite class and even in the thousands of novels I’ve checked out, I’ve never seen anything like it.Sadly though, other than that, it’s not really for me. Despite REALLY liking the idea of VRMMO, it always devolves, in my view, to petty things irl, political garbage, and massive guild fights…gone is any sense of adventure or exploration That aside, there are a good bit of shitty men in the novel, and while not disgustingly dark, the casual mention of abusing women did damper my interest in reading the novel. Cheers, I hope the novel continues on happily
Good start. The plot ressembles a bit like a kdrama. l'm looking forward to read more.
I haven't read it yet, but Sloth is a good writer, so i have high expectations
I think the writer is improving his content with every passing chapter , as in the later chapters it's getting more fun to read and you can sense a hope of a feeling through the MCs words , not forced but real , and the technological input is also more Deep not extensive but enough to tell the reader about what is going on .
What a story! Character development, world-building and also the pace, superb, just super!! Wanna more chapters!! The fight scenes... freaking awesome!
The story is good and has more potential.But the writing is not as good as story is.He is making dialogue that doesn't fit just to make it mysterious and to add a sense of darkness.Relationship and friendship are just feeling too forcefull. like og mc of novel challenged our mc try to crush him but in next few chapters they become rivals when I was reading that i felt absolute cringe.Writing need improvement and story is too fast paced.Everything is perfect other than that.Author need to work on relationship and dialogue first than story.Highly recommend
nice book but still reading and waiting for more chapter
Great story so far, excited to see where it goes. It offers a fresher approach to a Naruto Fan-Fiction by taking place a bit disconnected from the main story in both location and age. Some critiques would be the flipping of gender pronouns for certain characters in the beginning which can be a bit disorientating and the pacing can seem a bit on the slower side without a sense of direction for a bit.Praises would be the focus on building the main characters emotions and fleshing out the supporting cast for him.Recommendations for the author would be to draw inspiration from the original source material through side-films and filler episodes, rereview some of the earlier chapter to correct grammar and pronoun mistakes.
Hello Author,thank you so much for the wonderful story. I just found your book today and read all of the chapters. Your story is really interesting to read and it make hooked. Hope you will update soon.
nice work. i so love the world background and the plot. I'm expecting more from this author.
willing to give it a chance seems decent i will come edit my review after...if i forget someone remind me?
Got hooked instantly once you give it a chance, I also been into military/mecha novels and anime for a while so i might be biased. ........................