Author please...please..please continue this novel..i really like it..why did you stop?..you said its not your style but i can tell you that the chapters are really great..so you can do it..i like the way how you wrote..the characters behaviour..everyrhing so far is good..Please please please please continue and finish this novel
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
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This book is wonderful, you are a great writer. Looking forward to reading future chapters, although wondering when he will start romancing Aurora. Anyways great job and keep Up the good work. Stable and great story, decenct fights but could be better more detailed I mean. Great world description and much more.
Okay okay I've only read to chapter 9 but I can tell this is better than both of the VR novels currently in the top 40. The grammar is impeccable. The MC isn't dull, I haven't gotten to the side characters yet but I have complete faith in the author. Please don't drip this novel Mr. Author I'll do the best I can to get this noticed. I'm in it for the long haul. ?
I really like the humor aspect of the story and admire the concept of human psychology that you put through in the story. There are some grammar problems in the early chapters but it doesn't hinder in understanding the flow of the story. Some paragraphs are way too long which are kinda hard to read using mobile phones. Also, there are some cuts or spaces in the first chapter that you forgot to fix. Overall, your story really shows how high standard your skill in writing is. I hope you keep writing more stories since this one is already completed.
Con una escupida de sangre, la mujer blanca miró a Feng Yun a toda prisa, luego se dio la vuelta y se escondió en la exuberante jungla. La respiración de toda la persona había convergido. Feng Yun estaba aquí y no podía sentir ninguna fluctuación del Qi del Espíritu en ella.
In sorry but i will drop it... In the early chapter i like the story but... At the end it dissapointed meI already read it until chapter 200+ and you know, MC died again! He reincarnated again but its still ok, the problem is after he reincarnated, the story becomes Really boring!
The only problem is the translation quality. Since it the time the translator change it become horrible to understand. If only something would be done. I mean this is still one of my favorite novel yet I'm putting it on hold until maybe someday when it will be retranslated. meh
Well it was a good Story. Now he left and on his website are no new Updates...Storys which will not finish should be removed..........
The novel is flowing like water with every chapter there is no dismantle conception regarding mc on its way .it regards the way one should never give up. But the main part is that these story has no copy of any other story it's completely new and the concept and the world they have described is truly astonishing