I really enjoyed reading this novel, but this novel is no longer fun after chapter 50, because the IQ of other characters in this novel is too low. I doubt the development of this novel.
Hello readers, being my first book, the beginning chapters might have many issues including grammar errors.. Under development...I'll try to make the story interesting to mske up for this issue... Please bear with it
Well past the 1st 10 chps it's pretty generic ig , don't mind , I read something similar a while ago , I mean these tropes and ginks r bound to be repeated after all , still pretty fun read
Well let me be honest.........I don't read these virtual MMO games stories anymore........but what kept me to your story isn't that its your writing style dude...........Its legit good..........Even if you make a mess in the story later on I promise your writing quality will save you for sure......keep writing stories and i will actively follow them.......
I don’t know why this novel has such a high rating, it’s god awful. Zero character development, zero plot, zero world building. All there is to this story (if u can even call it that) is power leveling and ass kissing. Every chapter there’s “He’s so handsome”, “How can he be that powerful?”, “I wanna have his baby!”. Clearly written for 8 year olds or ppl with low IQ who can’t follow a real storyline. I get that it’s a satire making fun of stereotypical Chinese webnovels, but in the process it becomes one that’s even worse. The attempt at comedy is forced and repetitive, and it becomes not funny if that’s all there is to his novel.
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Fuck you webnovel Why the hell was this novel removed from the voting list??? Fuck you webnovel x2 Fuck you webnovel x3 Fuck you webnovel x4
This book is awesome , i enjoyed it very much and you should give it a try if you like Dad stories.If you update more it would be more awesome
I cant understand the translation. Nothing matters if the translation is garbage. The expressions don't make sense, nothing makes sense. Those who stuck with it, I have to say super impressed.
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Shit ton of plot armour didn't get far because of how immature the MC is. Thinking he is a god when he can easily be squashed so plot armour commence I can bear with the typos an half sentence but God damn this MC is supposed to be smart as all get up yet bitches an moans like Oliver does... From what i see author has a superiority complex or is narcasistic or just wants atte ruin everyone has to adore an be shocked every time a MC gets into a little battle just seems so conveniently set up to do just so gonna have to drop unfortunately