It is a nice story that touches in the family sphere as the angular stone. Some of the interactions are really enjoyable to read.Things to improve:Grammar: Some redundancy and hard sentences make it block the flow of the reader.Characters: While I liked the interaction between characters. It misses some inner thoughts on the making for the characters. Using subtext would create more connection with the public.All in all, keep the good work
Please keep it coming author ,I don't like the suspense ?♥️♥️
a very good story i have very high hopes about this novel. hopefully the author doesn't drop it later on since this is actually a very intriguing story
Haha I love how the ML can't say no to FL. I really enjoy the fact that there are no major misunderstanding that leads to abuse that is getting common in fics.
I'm only at the initial chapters, but I have to say it's pretty good so far. The prologue teasers have me hyped for what's to come. One thing to note is that the author's writing style is very in-depth and descriptive, so it might not be your cup of tea if you just want to turn your brain off and read something simple. Overall, this novel has a lot of potential ?
Finally an actually good snake boy story......................................................................................................
there seems to be a problem with the chapters? after chapter 30 most of the story is missing like jumping scenes further in the video too much missing content that I can't keep up. almost like the book was finished but Manny chapter are missing? good story please fix the technical issue and fill in the missing pieces.
I really hate when authors make the Mc mentally unstable for the sake of character development. I know as an author it seems clever and unique, but when you see this kind of trope so many times, as a reader it becomes annoying and obvious because you expect how the character is supposed to develop. When he was first transmigrated and decided to leave the dukes house instead of waitin to get disowned, it made him seem real decisive and mature but later on when he interacts with other characters or his actions he acts like a 13 year old. what makes readers want to read a novel is the premise of the story and first impression of the Mc. When you change that it’s almost like a smack in the face to us, when we thought we were getting a mature, decisive, witty, funny, and Chad Mc but what we get in turn is a whiney, mentally unstable 13 year old with a cringe system. IT RUINS THE CHARACTER. So even though we know he will grow it makes that process so much more annoying. In conclusion for a new author it’s a pretty good story and in the future I’m sure it will be a masterpiece, but as of right now it’s pretty mediocre. I hope his development won’t be a long drawn out process because it waste the readers time. Best of luck to the author ✍️ hope u keep writing?
The story is amazing and has room for more characters.
I love how the story started the unfolding of characters and all. I thought I was reading a three in one story. I was blown away. Authoress Pharee Dah thanks for entertaining us with your work.????
I love where this is going so far. Keep up the good work and give us the juice already☺️☺️☺️
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