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The story is good and so is the concept. The intro is catching, it makes you want to know what will happen to the poor blind Micah. The world background is perfect, it keeps me imagining how it looks like. Good job author ???.
I absolutely love this story! The love that the main poly couple has it so amazing and supportive of each other. but in no way was it simple and the author does a great job showing all the emotions from everyone in this new family. It also expands into the family&friends and their ups and downs, back stories and all the emotions involved. My only wish is to keep the updates steady, but I know with sickness and rough weather its not always easy to keep up. But in all honesty it's worth wait! Can't wait to see where the relationships go next, will some couples turn over a new leaf in life or continue down the wrong road ?!..
Author, I am telling you with the right character development, this one can turn out to be a great novel, Theme is GUN SYSTEM is very well selected, a new concept, keep on going, waiting for new releases, already added it in my library
Interesting I am not sure what to comment besides interesting. And my review should not be less than 140 characters which I am not there yet
this story explores anything and this story will give you a better experience while reading, me as writer would rate this 5 stars because this is the one of my favorite novel
I like the concept behind this novel. However, the execution of this concept is horrible. The protagonist is rarely seen interacting with the system he is gifted with; however, somehow, he has many rewards that presumably came from the system. The main character makes dumb decisions and actively neglects his citizens because he has a 'quest' to complete. The technology spoken of is not well research, and therefore anyone with even a slight bit of knowledge in a certain field is going o cringe at some of the moments throughout this novel.If you want to read a wildly confusing novel where the main character tells people from medieval times to build a bulldozer, and then they do it with no questions asked, this is the novel for you.
A better Fantasy Simulator right there..................................................................................................................................................................................................
the concept is interesting NGL....But I don't have my hopes up since it's listed in trial readAnd no trial read are good these days *sob* *sob*
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this is amazing, I can't wait for the next chapters, I got completely sucked into it and placed myself in the shoes of the MC and I could just see everything that happened before me and it's amazing
its good the character is balanced and he doesn't get powers out of no were like other novels so ya 5 star 5555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555