Bro at least put some +18 or adult or something and who can u write a 13 years old doing that ruined the story on chapter 6
brilliant work. it has to be selected no matter what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Amazing novel! World background is amazing and the mc is amazing. Mc is very smart as to how far i've seen.Everything is fine, the only thing that needs some improving is the writing quality, there are some minor mistakes but thats fine.Keep up the great work, I'll give you 5 stars!
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Please don't spend money reading this, if you enjoy the first 40 chapters that's great, i did too, but after that they went full on unedited MTL, and when i say unedited, i mean it's all one giant block of text.
This novel has so far (chapter 40) had a very fun and interesting look on the overused cliche of the MC returning to the past with almost perfect memory of random events that happened. Personally, I fully love this novel, the characters, and hope that it continues.I hope that this story does NOT become a Hearm and stays a honest and wholesome story about two childhood friend's love.
This author could write the art of describing a monster and sell millions of copies.Perfect english and narrative skills. I'll update the review once it has more chapters.
Really loving what I've read so far. Especially love the character interactions and story building, can't wait to see where it'll go from here! Keep it up!
Absolute masterpiece! Congratulations bruh, you did a great job Loved it.
I only just started, but look at how many chapters I have to look forward to! It's refreshing seeing that the guy falls for the girl first, it almost never happens. He's not brooding and playing hard to get, which is so common now. It's nice to see he's the optimistic one.
I've read 21 chapters so far. The novel has a great start. The first chapter perfectly sums up Zed's first life. His new life starts with a great scene that made me care for the two main characters. The following chapters are slow-paced, but I enjoyed reading them, too. They have more information about the world, Zed, and his sister. The world-building so far is done very well. I loved the action that started in chapter 9. It's a great story, full of magic and mystery.